If anyone can review my copy that'd be great. I would appreciate it if you could see how it flows, if it's choppy, and if it makes any sense. The copy would be for a self-improvement program. It's one of my first-ever pieces of copy, so I apologize in advance if it's trash. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UEf9tzr1GKggmk_7bKUX3GSoj-slf1ZsElLGB3_qsBU/edit?usp=sharing

There’s nothing worse than a disordered work environment. That’s why some of the most successful people took the time to develop habits and systems. They took the structure of things seriously. “Life without Design is Erratic” as Seneca famously said. We forget the importance of order because of this loud and crazed world. But making order from chaos is the path to obtaining freedom. Our minds are the most powerful tools we have, so taking care of it is vital if we want to achieve our goals. But there is also a responsibility that I see no one talking about that comes along with work. Clients aren’t just a money giver for us, but a responsibility. We provide value to them but also take care of their problems, that’s why we have to take care of our problems first. If everything in your life is dependent on willpower and a constant fight to stay focused, of course, you're going to get burned out… …That is why you have to build systems in place. Build the systems and understand consistency, but don’t mistake these things for rigidity. Be fluid in writing your copy. It reminds me of a story I heard in class. There was a Roman student who needed help, so he went to Epictetus for guidance, But surprisingly the teacher didn’t have an answer for him. The student wasn’t having it. He yelled, “You have to tell me what I should do!” Then Epictetus said, “It would be better if you asked me to help make you adaptable to circumstances.” That’s what we are as copywriters. We’re adaptable to anything that clients need. That’s what sets us apart from everyone else. Anyway, just some things I was going over this morning. Peace.

This has been on my mind recently because I'm about to start doing outreach. Since I'm 17 and unable to use Upwork, I must go the cold DM route. There's an age limit of 18. It doesn't faze me; it's probably better for them to not get idiots. - When I get a client, will the client give me feedback on my copy? I'm wondering how to check the quality of my copy each time before sending it. Will they already have an email list on Klaviyo, MailChimp, etc.? - When I go on IG to find clients, how do I know what businesses would be worth reaching out to? I type in a certain niche, but it comes up people with thousands of followers. There's a realistic side to this that I can't ignore when doing outreach. - Before reaching out, do I need to know how to provide all types of copy, such as Sales pages, Facebook ads, Google ads, etc. before reaching out? I'm wondering if this is possible because everyone who sees me working tells me I won't even be able to get a reply from businesses. I'll keep moving, I just need some input.

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