Can I get some feedback on this guy please WHAMFAM https://recordings.salesloft.com/c/111302/479d5edc-e6fc-4d6b-bf1c-550a87b09859

Hi guys I have changed up my script to try and sound more like plumbers. Can I get a Script feed back. “I get invited in by ambitious plumbers who spending so much time on their tools and running the day to day, so they don’t have the time to grow their business, which leads to some finding it difficult to bring in steady flow of customers through the door others not being able to get if front of the right types of people, which leads to wasting time on customers who aren’t serious and many of them are too busy with juggling heavy work loads and building a social presence becomes an after thought I got a feeling you are going to tell that none of that applies to you and everything is perfect.” Also here is a cold call I have done using that script. It lasted for 10 minutes, I had a re-watch of it myself I feel like I could ask better questions and I was getting stuck on questions to ask. I would love to get your guys feedback. https://youtu.be/atN8caFFoAA

Let's get a thread going - post a call and let's start giving some feedback

I am reaching out to kitchen remodelers, Can I get feed back to the cold call https://youtu.be/NV9gkNF3Y80

I cold called Will Aitken last week for his cold calling challenge. Made the top 3 using WHAM tactics, but he is looking for votes to find the top 1. Help me beat Pareto. Also, please give feedback on the call. I found it hard to build emotion as Will wasn't the DM.