How can I improve this video? · Content Savage Squad

How can I improve this video?

Hey guys!

I'm asking a similar question around a few different online communities to get as much feedback as possible. A little bit of context: I run a social media production company that helps our clients create content without needing to learn anything about it. We're actually doing really well at the moment (300% growth this month!), but I know that the content we produce could be better. I've included a script and it's corresponding video in this post to see what could be improved.

Here's the script: "One of my bookings completely violated the rule book and threw a huge party that was super loud… which of course made the neighbors pretty upset because THEY were the ones that ultimately had to deal with the noise.

Which brings us back to the important aspect of hosting that most people don’t think about: keep your neighbors happy.

The neighboring houses are going to have to see guests coming and going all the time, so you had BETTER make sure that they’re happy about it or else they’ll be the first to complain. And the worst part about that, is it’s not like a guest that goes away after they complain.

They’re there 24 hours a day, 7 days a week, or at least that’s how you have to think about it.

So if you want to learn how to handle those kinds of issues and make a TON of money with short term rentals, then head to the link in my bio so I can teach you how!"

Some feedback I've gotten so far that will be implemented into future videos: make better hooks, get to the point faster, set up a better recording space, stick to one camera angle, and be less "wordy" in general. No feedback is too small, and this may be a good reminder that you don't need to be super talented to be successful 😂

PS: I think I'm posting this in the right chat, if not I apologize in advance and please let me know which chat is the correct one!

https://youtube.com/shorts/c-tPhbkYjrQ?si=IfopPDbjlB2ZvA9M

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