Need feedback on my Solar ad copy
Hi guys! I've been struggling to get leads for my solar client, drafted a copy based on Jimmy's videos and want to get some feedback on how I can improve it (if anyone has headline suggestions it will also be nice) Copy 1: š New York Homeowners š If you pay over $100 per month for electricity, here is some cold harsh truthā¦ In just 4 years, electricity costs have risen by 62%, with an 11.8% increase this year. That means if you pay $200 for electricity right now, you could be looking at a $400 bill in the next 6-7 years. And it gets worse - around 50% of your electric bill is just for delivery fees from New Jersey, so youāre paying twice as much. Ouch, thatās a big hit on your wallet, right? Lucky for you, we helped over 312 homeowners permanently reduce their electric bill by installing solar panels (for no money out of pocket). Now, theyāre saving $100, $200 or even $500 every month on their electric bills. āļøāļøāļøāļøāļøāI used to pay over $170 per month for electricity because of my pool, now Iām locked in to just $80. Looking forward to my big savings. Installation was fast and service has been great. Definitely recommend it to all my friends.ā - Cathay from Nassau ā
Permanently reduce your electric bills ā
Get up to $17,000 in government incentives ā
Have backup power during outages ā
Increase your homeās value But thereās a catch, to qualify you need to meet 3 requirements: - Own your home (sorry, no renters) - Have an electric bill higher than $75 in the summer - Your roof must get an adequate amount of sunlight (not surrounded by trees) š As a special offer, we are offering $1,000 cash after install for the next 7 homeowners that qualify Click āLearn moreā and take our 60-second survey to see how much you can save per month with solar. Once you complete the survey, we will send you a free savings report ā° Our calendar is filling up quite quickly - so donāt miss out