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Need feedback on my Solar ad copy

Hi guys! I've been struggling to get leads for my solar client, drafted a copy based on Jimmy's videos and want to get some feedback on how I can improve it (if anyone has headline suggestions it will also be nice)

Copy 1:

🏠 New York Homeowners 🏠

If you pay over $100 per month for electricity, here is some cold harsh truth…

In just 4 years, electricity costs have risen by 62%, with an 11.8% increase this year.

That means if you pay $200 for electricity right now, you could be looking at a $400 bill in the next 6-7 years.

And it gets worse - around 50% of your electric bill is just for delivery fees from New Jersey, so you’re paying twice as much.

Ouch, that’s a big hit on your wallet, right?

Lucky for you, we helped over 312 homeowners permanently reduce their electric bill by installing solar panels (for no money out of pocket).

Now, they’re saving $100, $200 or even $500 every month on their electric bills.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️“I used to pay over $170 per month for electricity because of my pool, now I’m locked in to just $80. Looking forward to my big savings. Installation was fast and service has been great. Definitely recommend it to all my friends.” - Cathay from Nassau

✅ Permanently reduce your electric bills

✅ Get up to $17,000 in government incentives

✅ Have backup power during outages

✅ Increase your home’s value

But there’s a catch, to qualify you need to meet 3 requirements: