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โ€ข Nov '24
I would include what you are eating and how it has worked for you. As it stands there is alot of information and no proof. no Testimonial or a reason to believe that it does work. the instructions are vague. Try to build more trust in your system.
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โ€ข Nov '24
Grammarly, watch your punctuation. it is inconsistent. CTA is very direct and forgettable . Use the connection you are building throughout to make your CTA more meaningful.
Hope that helps!
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