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Cold email outreach
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Hi Tom,
I was scrolling through your Instagram yesterday at the gym,
and I couldn’t help but admire the dedication you’ve poured into "Beckles Fitness" Coaching.
That transformation post with your client who lost 12 kg was seriously inspiring
That’s why I wanted to reach out.
Did you know businesses with longer, audience-focused sales pages can increase their conversion rates by up to 220%? (Sources: FIREWORK, IMPACT).
Here’s the thing
I noticed you don’t have a dedicated sales page for your coaching program.
Without one, potential clients might not have enough information to confidently take the next step.
To help, I’ve recorded a quick 3-minute video explaining how you can structure a high-converting sales page tailored to your coaching.
It’s designed to help you get more clients without adding more to your plate.
Just reply with "Send it!", and I’ll get the video over to you.
Looking forward to seeing Beckles Fitness grow, Matiss
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