So basically I don’t really know what to do in this situation, This is a quite a small fitness influencer, but I saw that he has online coaching, but doesn’t have a sales page, so I followed him and he wrote to me first we had a bit of conversation. so what do you think how should I approach this situation?? My idea was to ask him why doesn’t he have a sales page and then offer to build a sales page or mby build him a sales page and send it to him and then see if he likes it and then sell it to him. What do you think 🤔?? Here’s the conversation 👇

You need to FIX this!!!! Hey Sal I’ve been following you for a while now and I really enjoy your instagram story videos But... I noticed something that might be holding you back from getting even more clients. Soo… If you're looking to level up your coaching brand and attract more clients, there's one thing you need to fix. I could send you a free 2-3 min video where I’ll cover: 🔹 What it is thats holding you back 🔹 How it’s holding you back from getting more clients 🔹 And How to fix it If that sounds good, just reply to this email and I’ll send over the video. If not, no worries at all! Thanks for your time, Matiss

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!? MAX!!!!! you are probably wondering 🤔 WTF is this ???? I did that so I would grab your attention So to no waste more of your time let’s cut ✂️ through the bull shit I am writing you this short email 📧 because I saw something in your instagram That is stopping ✋you from getting much more clients And it just needed to be fixed👨‍🔧 as soon as possible So if you whant I can send you a FREE 1-3 min video of me explaining 🔹What it is 🔹why it’s holding you back from getting more clients 🔹AND how you can fix it If you are interested please let me know Just write ✍️ something back to me I really hope that I didn’t waste much of your time By…

Could you pls rate it like 1-10 And also point out the mistakes also i will like ❤️ every comment Hey 👋 Boxi Xiong By the way I really like your progress videos on instagram they truly inspire me But Im writing ✍️ this email because I saw that you have a 1 one 1 coaching And i am a copywriter that specialises in sales pages and newsletters 📰 So Im offering you a 100% risk free offer It goes like this 👇 If you are interested in a sales page that attracts more customers write ✍️ me back and let me know I will make you a sale page in less than a week then show you the finished product And if you like it we can talk about the price 💵 But if you don’t like it then I can remake it or just go away🚶 any don’t bother you anymore sounds like a good deal man??