First time writing a direct response email copy, let me know what you think. (NOT my first time writing copy, NEWBIES KEEP YOUR HAND OFF): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AIKIrIKn1aT9_i_Dy7AkoBu36yuT13uH8zRDjVSziGQ/edit?tab=t.qh6dbgp0evxf

@Andreas Ostergaard “The secret to Direct Response copy is to call out their existing pain points, promise a solution to their existing problems, and distinguish that this solution is different from anything else they’ve ever tried.” — Stefan Georgi, $1BN Copywriter "Direct response is about PROMISING to solve PROBLEMS your prospects urgently want to be solved... and PROVING you can actually deliver on that promise." — Mario Castelli, 9-Figure Copywriter for Brands Like V-Shred, Modern Millionaires, Etc.

@Baris Can done

@Anthony Lizamen check my comments...

I understand there's a ton of weight loss copy but I made a version you've NEVER seen before. (the best fitness copy in 2024): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AIKIrIKn1aT9_i_Dy7AkoBu36yuT13uH8zRDjVSziGQ/edit?tab=t.86vfuwe6j612

@Tornike Baramashvili thanks for the feedback brother, will fix it right now

First time writing a direct response email copy, let me know what you think. (NOT my first time writing copy, NEWBIES KEEP YOUR HAND OFF): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AIKIrIKn1aT9_i_Dy7AkoBu36yuT13uH8zRDjVSziGQ/edit?tab=t.qh6dbgp0evxf