LinkedIn profile review (some parts in progress)

Aug 23 in General

Hey friends, hoping to get some feedback + advice

Here's my current LinkedIn profile - https://www.linkedin.com/in/steven-moneir-a5a804305/

My main or intro offer is - Add $30-220k in MRR to your ecommerce store with our email and sms infrastructure - built within 48 hours. If we don't deploy it within that time frame you get a full refund and keep everything we've built out for you (not the exact wording but the gist of it).

Headline: I've updated to an outcome reflecting my offer

Banner: I need to update similar to the outcome, just waiting on some tips from another post

Profile pic: I am handsome as hell and think this pic is ok

Button Link: Mine goes straight to the discovery call appoint link, should i change the name of it?

Featured post:

Post 1: I'm thinking of creating a doc covering details of my main offer and why it's a solid solution for my ICP, would love some thoughts on this.
Post 2: Just a link to my calendar.

I'm open to other ideas, free audit video or anything similar that would be good.

About us section: current is a bit tacky, admittedly. Reading it i'd be like wtf is this guy talking about. I'm thinking of updating it to something like the attached screenshot

I've also attached my LinkedIn Profile Map

Thanks in advance!

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