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Subject = This Sacred Feasts from the Celestial Kitchens Preheader = gives you save 2x time on washing dishes Dear American: This celestial kitchen tool was only used by professional chefs. It was hidden from locals like you, this Keto One Pan Cookbook. This can memorize up to 70+ recipes in itself. It is Universal Access to Expertise so, You can cook different dishes from different countries If you’ve been embarrassed recently because you’ve forgotten simple dishes and recipes… If you’ve always been unsure about what to cook or are stuck in a meal rut for your family… And If you’ve Limited knowledge of or access to diverse cuisines and food cultures… I urge you to take this cookbook to make recipes in 5 minutes or less. And make everything in a single pan. Bon appetit!
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New comment 18h ago
[For Crituque] Rule Of One
I prepared 2 versions of the copy, choose which is better, thanks. A copy focusing on ONE BIG IDEA by Masterson. SL: Why simple copy results to success. PV: The Rule of One shows why your copy shouldn’t be complicated. %NAME%, Are you cramming too many ideas into your copy, hoping something will stick with your audience? Because I’m gonna tell you why you’re making a fundamental fatal mistake of why your copy doesn’t convert. The feeling of being able to say so many things makes you feel you really know what you’re doing. But what if I told you that it is also the same thing that destroys the clarity of your copy? Do you know “CCC” and “CCC”? It’s simply, “Clarity Copy Converts”, and “Complicated Copy Confuse”. This law applies the Rule Of One. As explained by Michael Masterson, It means by focusing on ONE BIG IDEA in your copy works way better than piling on a bunch of different points. Sounds simple but I know it’s hard, why? The overthinking moment of what ifs, “What if i lack the something to persuade” “What if they won’t understand if i didn’t tell them more?” So on, and so forth. Actually, NAME, Less is more. Because the most effective copy focuses on a single, clear, and compelling idea. Many copywriters or marketers use a "tossed salad" approach, Cramming multiple points together hoping something resonates. Little did they know, Successful ads and copy are often the simplest, clearest, and easiest to understand. So make sure the next time you write your copy to whatever it is, Keep in your heart, mind, and soul to always apply the Rule Of One. One Big Idea, Dmitri P.S: If you want more FREE value bombshells about copywriting proven strategies to convert an audience to customers/clients. Click here. SL: Why Simple Copy Leads to Success PV: Discover how the Rule of One shows why less is more in your copy. Hi %NAME%, Are you cramming too many ideas into your copy, hoping something will stick with your audience? Let me explain why this might be the biggest mistake that's keeping your copy from converting.
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New comment 22h ago
Please can someone review this copy for me
Please can someone review this copy for me I am an artist who designs hand painted clothes and articles and I want people to patronize me so I hope to put in on a flyer and paste it across the street. STAND OUT WITH CUSTOM HAND PAINTED FASHION Wanna look different and get noticed? Isn't yet time to do things differently from how you do them often? Looking for something unique to rock the next party or create content that elevate your presence on Instagram and TikTok, My hand painted custom is all you need. Here is why you worth it ? Are you a TikToker ,a dancer, DJ, party or fashion influencers you can create proffessional and unique content that stands out and grab your audience attention with our customs. Do you wish to be the “center of attention” in any party and stand out to be the envy of the crowd do it effortlessly with our beautiful customs design. Imagine surprising your babe or loved ones on their birthday with our customs so that you leave big smiles on their faces and lasting impressions on their souls Our neat computer -like hand painted custom are tailored to your style and choice. Don't worry, Yes, it doesn't wash off and it's long lasting and durable. And our services are risk free we grant 100% refund policy in case of any dissatisfaction. Still contemplating? call or text these number now for more enquires 20% discount for first 20 persons act fast and get your discount. 08127440328 Thanks you
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New comment 7d ago
[ Qritique ] here's my first email copy, please be harsh guys.
Escape the rat race Now… or stay a Slave forever… This is the difference between being in the rat race and escaping it: This is Hamza Ahmed a famous YouTuber and businessman, with more than 2 Million subs and 2 Million $, and now he makes more than 200k $ every single Month, and here’s the proof: Despite his huge YouTube channel, from his Skool community alone he makes more than 129,000$. With more than 1k members in his community and 129$ low price that’s 129k/mo Every F month. But was it always like this for him? Of course not, he was an average kid wth an addictive personality, playing video games and seaking instant pleasure as you saw in the first pic on the left; That was until.. He discovered self improvement and escaped the rat race and that’s him again in the right pic. Now if you want to escape the rat race and do something meaningfull with your life, here’s the top 3 steps to take right now: 1.  Acknowledge your purpose: You need a strong (why) that keeps you accountable, in order to live a good life you need to work towards a clear vision, here’s the 4 questions you need to ask yourself to open your eyes and clear that vision: 1. What would you do if you’re fearless and you couldn’t fail? 2. What will you be most proud of a year from now? 3. What are the 3 things you need to stop? 4. What advice would you give someone in your situation? 2. Write your SMART Goal: It wouldn’t take you long to write your plan if you have a clear goal, but you still miss the SMART part, you see … knowing your goal won’t take anywhere without a solid plan, and I’ll show you how to set one, but first what is a SMART Goal? S for specific, M for measurable, A for achievable, R for relevant and most importantly T for time-bound. Here’s a stupid goal: I want to lose fat. Here’s a SMART goal: I will lose 10 pounds of fat in 8 weeks to fit in my suit. After that you can set your plan easily having a SMART goal to achieve. 3. Work towards your goal every day:
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New comment 11d ago
Hey guys I just wrote my first blog post and email copy, please review it and most importantly... be harsh.
the blog: https://medium.com/@mohamedahmednani/the-ultimate-guide-on-how-to-make-money-online-for-free-in-2024-0674cc347f07 the email: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tOR12Yv7rHPB992r_xSwYMedJ5GnuyJqg08YCfKtfT4/edit#heading=h.pdf4mmlt77rw please give me your true opinion
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New comment 12d ago
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