I have a question I am confused about what I send first message on Instagram and facebook to business owners that makes them to reply me🤔

This is definitely not the final version of my About page and I'll be improving it more tomorrow based on my offer (that I'm in the process of improving) and some feedback on the current version of the About page. I think it's better than it was before, I'll attach a photo below. 👇 ❗ Don't look at the images I haven't started doing anything with them yet, but I am open to suggestions! ⬇️ ⬇️ ⬇️ "Welcome to The Journey, your daily dose of entrepreneurial reality! 🔴 Join now and lock in for FREE! For those committed to hard work, discipline, and continuous improvement, understanding that success is built one step at a time. ✅ You will get: - Input-focused challenges - Templates for tracking and reflection - Accountably partners - Feedback from entrepreneurs - Productivity hacks - Support from people like you - Business made cool ☺️ No flashy promises, get-rich-quick schemes, or overnight successes. Just real people sharing their journeys to success with all the wins AND fails. 💫 Whether looking for advice on landing their first client, cold call scripts, developing a high-income skill, or needing a little motivation and support. Join and let progress be your way of life 👉 P. S. Alex Hormozi’s principles are applied A LOT here." Excited to hear your feedback, be honest 🤗

What do y’all think of the labels I gave the different levels you can unlock? 🔓😂

Okay y’all… It’s about time we start sharing some tips, amiright? I have two golden rules of copywriting that I follow religiously when I’m writing for myself or for clients ⭐️ And the first is this… Lead with the benefit. I’ll be sharing the second one soon 👀 Whether you’re writing an ad, a sales page, email, or anything else that’s supposed to drive sales… make the benefit clear! Here are two spec ads I created for Salesforce and 1st Phorm (two of my favorite brands). Two things are clear… - The benefit - The call to action I’ll be going into more detail about this in my newsletter this week 😎 If you want a weekly branding tip from me, subscribe here: https://sharpbrand.beehiiv.com/subscribe