@Kareem Elshamy That is so beautiful that I would love to connect with you.

@Kareem Elshamy I’ll drop you a dm

Hey man, I will say make sure when you are sending outreach your message would not be in any way misunderstood because the first statement comes off like the person is too busy to be able to improve their sales. Instead, give them a comment on how their content has helped or what you resonated with, with one of their contents. Best way, take one of their contents that you resonate with, share it to them with a comment on how that helped you. They are most likely going to respond to you. I am still yet to close a client or get anyone on a call cos really I have not focused on outreach at all but the two outreach I have done, I have gotten responses. One from a guy with 1.6M followers and the other with 571k. Learnt that from Tom Stoic. Check his 1.5hrs copywriting course on youtube, you will get the sauce. With this client you can still do the above as a follow up and see if they respond to that.

@Chinelo Nwatu Beautiful and short email. Well done!

Hey man, would appreciate a review. Thanks https://docs.google.com/document/d/14Z260m9PbZUEK1dxE1X54T9IuDzwCa0zgBb721rTlXY/edit?usp=sharing

Totally agree, because I sometimes have that thought and it does not feel natural when I say oh imma just write PAS. Although with proper deep thinking, some good stuff might be produced.