This is copy I wrote for a dating program using an imaginary protagonist, every comment will be appreciated https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VndKkN7Bm8xyZ1cvpx_T6O53ZlvHM6DCTvEUiCpGNtM/edit?usp=sharing

Hey I'd appreciate getting this copy reviewed https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-L22Bx6-9icqn1l-EV3D8tBC6EiQE7aPNUhl_zgV6GE/edit?usp=sharing

Wanted to show you guys a prompt I regularly use to improve my copy, making it more concise, grammatically correct, and understandable. 1. Give ChatGPT the context of WHO (tone, character, common words) the prospect I am writing for is, and WHO (pains, desires, objections) their audience is. 2. Then I ask it to rate my copy from 1-10. It usually gives me a 7-8/10 and some suggestions, i take the suggestions and apply them (to some degree) without sounding bot-like. 3. I usually stop at 9/10, because after that, it starts getting carried away trying to change everything lol. This is my strategy, give your thoughts below if you found this useful, or if you have anything to add to make this better.

hello. my name is eric. I am specializing in fitness and health copy. I am also a certified personal trainer. I am looking to do both.

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