@Dave Miz I agree, but in this case it's a public company so we need approval for every metric posted. Tough call... but we wanted to reach our ICP before Q1 decision making and not wait on approval.

@David Mink Thanks for that, I'll tweak the format to front load results to keep engagement

He's my opinion: 1.) A+ headline and photo (says what you do, shows your vibe), but you need a banner with a little more flavour to match 🤠 2.) HOWEVER: "The real game-changer?" is telling me this is AI copywriting. I'd always give any output a once over and ask "Would I *actually* talk like that?" and if so, great! But if not a few quick edits can personalize it more and keep visitors interested. I keep a "killfile" of phrases or words I see that stick out as GPT or AI-gen hallmarks and use it to tune my prompts for better results.

My 0.002c: You've got two taglines in one headline, I'd stick with the more action oriented one and move "I carry backpacks and brands to greater heights" to your longer description for colour. People need to digest the headline in one bite!