Pretty solid copy imo! I would rate it a 7/10, really concise and straightforward but definitely ways to improve (as always).
I think it's important to explain what "active living" is and to do so right away to clear up any confusion for the viewer. Along with that, I think your CTA could be more enticing (Ex. "If you're ready to take the next step in your fitness journey, click here").
In the end, I'm still a beginner so you can take my advice lightly. Keep going!
it is good but can't you make those points little short, If possible then make it and keep headlines bold as no one reads the deep info if they ain't interested that much.
Story telling was good, but don't you think 9 pages is just bit too much. Try to make it short even if you are telling story but overall it's just impressive.
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Hi, everyone. I wasn't born in an English-speaking country. I'm not making excuses, but Tyon said to do this:
Compile:
Common sayings
Angles
Hooks
Offer
What most people teach and why it's inferior
What I teach and why it's superior
Stories
I really don't know how to research this. It's my first time, and maybe that's why this is my roadblock to starting research. If someone can help me fix this, I can move forward. I guarantee I will be better, and next time, I'll try to help you with something. Help me out this time, dude.
The second statement,“Every person who is reading this at least have a shallow idea” is a deal breaker even for me. U literally just told me that I'm not the only reading this so I don't feel special anymore. (Even if it's an obvious case don't say it). U are definitely an Andrew Tate fan that's for sure 😂😂
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