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• Sep '24
bruh it's easily 9/10. Your story telling is very good loved it. The line "are you on drugs" got me 😂 really.
It is very good.
Keep going, you got this!!
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• Sep '24
thnk u😂
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• Sep '24
If I had suggestions option, I could have changed it.
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• Sep '24
Don't waste peoples time bruh make your copy accessible
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• Sep '24
Sorry Bro
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• Sep '24 (edited)
Pretty solid copy imo! I would rate it a 7/10, really concise and straightforward but definitely ways to improve (as always).
I think it's important to explain what "active living" is and to do so right away to clear up any confusion for the viewer. Along with that, I think your CTA could be more enticing (Ex. "If you're ready to take the next step in your fitness journey, click here").
In the end, I'm still a beginner so you can take my advice lightly. Keep going!
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• Sep '24
Thanks for your pointers G
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• Sep '24
don't write in chunks
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• Sep '24
hello thank you for your replay but I can not understand what do you mean by chunks. Could you please edit it if you want .
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Review it plz
And if possible rate it out of ten
Criticism is appreciated
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• Sep '24
this is my first copy after being scared for two days just to start i need feedback from this great community review please
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• Sep '24
there is no need to be ashamed of. Imo the 1st one which you enhanced using Ai is scrap. Without reading it feels robotic so don't do that again.
I've commented your mistakes and if you access me for edit I'll make more changes.
Like my comments and if you want more advice and review follow me.
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• Sep '24
like the post and comments
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• Sep '24
good!!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
give access bruh
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• Sep '24
atleast give me permission to comment!!!!
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• Sep '24
give me access to comment bruh
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• Sep '24
your copy doesn't have any CTA, I'm hoping that it was for a newsletter.
You could have just asked to subscribe the newsletter.
I've commented the changes you should do and even changed those chunky lines.
Work on it. It was good tho.
Keep going you got this!!
If you find it valuable Do Like the post and my comments l!!
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• Sep '24
done!! Like the post and comments.
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• Sep '24
Loved your bullet points.
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
it is just so wild. I get it your audience is teenagers but still calling someone ugly? Never seen that.
You could have just used the money term to show them how life can go bad.
It was just so wide.
Tell them you are a brand which offers those services in Bullet points.
Overall good copy but imo don't call anyone ugly it will create had impact on teens.
Keep working!!!
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• Sep '24
like the post and comments if you liked my honest opinion.
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• Sep '24
straight to the point thing. I liked it.
I'd appreciate your like on post and my comments
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• Sep '24
like my comment to G. I just liked ur comment and post
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• Sep '24
This is my first copy ever written, with just PAS in my mind and without the PAS template. Please review it.
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• Sep '24
give me access. Btw I'd appreciate your like on post and my comments.
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• Sep '24
it was too Chunky to read bro.
Next time write in one sentence.
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• Sep '24
Done. If you like my review, I'd appreciate Your like on my post and comments. FOLLOW FOR MORE REVIEWS.
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• Sep '24
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
I'd appreciate your like
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• Sep '24
Thanks brother
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• Sep '24
short and good
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
3/10. work hard
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• Sep '24
kk bro
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• Sep '24
it has extra space between lines.
After writing make sure to check the copy from phone because your reader will most probably use it.
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• Sep '24
it's also good.
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• Sep '24
good but write less chunky.
Id appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
it looks goodm
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• Sep '24
it is good. Bruh
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• Sep '24
to the point.
I'd appreciate your like
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• Sep '24
what kind of font is that??
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• Sep '24 (edited)
sorry there is a small issue with that.
But you tell me that how was the copy?
Here it is again....
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• Sep '24
to the point.
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• Sep '24
it is good but can't you make those points little short, If possible then make it and keep headlines bold as no one reads the deep info if they ain't interested that much.
Rest was good. 👍
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• Sep '24
just made a few changes, can you check it out?
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• Sep '24
guys plz follow my account i will also follow your account
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• Sep '24
hello everyone am a new here
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• Sep '24
Let me know bro
Story email with CTA to website.pdf
PDF • 44kb
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• Sep '24
s.l. was good.
Story telling was good, but don't you think 9 pages is just bit too much. Try to make it short even if you are telling story but overall it's just impressive.
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• Sep '24
keep it up
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• Sep '24
Like the post and follow for more reviews
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• Sep '24
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• Sep '24
copy is good!! Just some corrections and some discussion and you are good to go!!!
Keep going
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• Sep '24
Thank man, great review!
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• Sep '24
ok I'm doing it but like the post also.
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• Sep '24
damn bruh. Your lines and word selection are great and very suitable.
It was very fun to read it and I kept reading.
Overall it's very good!!!
And don't forget to like my each comments it helps me
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• Sep '24
someone else is doing it>
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• Sep '24
too chunky For a mobile user. try to write in just one line and rest on other line. rest I've commented on Doc
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• Sep '24
now like my all comments
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• Sep '24
ANOTHER BANGER EMAIL FROM
NONE OTHER THAN ME😉
This is for everyone read my copy and give me your honest and honest opinions
Trust me this is going to be the best thing
You have seen today
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• Sep '24
like this post.
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• Sep '24
rate it out of 10
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• Sep '24
Thanks
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• Sep '24
most welcomed!
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• Sep '24
It is good. I've made some changes Now you can learn them.
I'D appreciate LIKE on my comments and post.
Do follow for me.
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• Sep '24
Please Help me I'm trying to get my first client
_Desk Discoveries_.pdf
PDF • 39kb
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• Sep '24
I can teach you how to turn your $250 into $6,500 in 2hours without sending money to anyone or interrupting your daily activities and it's 100% legitimate and secure TEXT ME IF YOU ARE INTERESTED FOR MORE INFORM WITH THE DETAILS BELOW $$$$.
WHATSAPP NO: ‪+1 (607) 262-3961
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• Sep '24
DONE!! I'd appreciate LIKE on my comments and post.
Follow for more.
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• Sep '24
ngl Your font was very bad don't use that again. I literally skipped whole copy first. BUT rest of things were good!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
It was kinda goood!!! keep going!!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
hi can you give a rating from 1-10 and be brutally honest about it. Could you also share with me some tips on how to improve my writing
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• Sep '24
Fire mate KEEP GOING!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
LOL you won't believe this but my 1st copy was same template and topic hahhha.
It is good!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
5/10 your starting is bad but rest are good.
I'd appreciate a Like and follow.
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• Sep '24
thanks budy😊
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• Sep '24
Hey man, I know this copy is not good and not like my previous ones...
I just tried a full and full intrigue mail that creates curiosity,
mind reviewing it?
Thanks mate!
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• Sep '24
Done!1I'd appreciate a Like and follow
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• Sep '24
How much do u rateit
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• Sep '24
alright thanks!
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• Sep '24
Hello!
Here's my copy in the relationship/self-improvement niche (roughly my 5th and 6th attempts at email copy): https://docs.google.com/document/d/16e392lssUknGrxNaFsYq2n7yQu-LNs60GDprh2keo8k/edit?usp=sharing
Very much open to any constructive criticism and honest reviews as it helps out a ton.
Thanks in advance!
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• Sep '24
bro you cooked!!!!!
It was just great, I mean I read as a user and related with it.
It was just great.
10/10......
Let's goo....
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
Appreciate you man! I'm sure there are definitely areas I can improve in but man it does mean a lot!
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• Sep '24
First go at writing an email any honest thoughts will be appreciated
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• Sep '24
It's so Chunky and font is big for mobile users.
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
here's mine
brutally honest review would be appreciated, thanks in advance.
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• Sep '24
done!! Copy is good but...
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
Thank you!
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• Sep '24
there is no S.L? No p.v.?
And it took bad from mobile.
Take a look. Don't forget most probably your T.A is reading mail from phone
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• Sep '24
if you like me review, I'd appreciate a like and follow
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• Sep '24
hey !
this is my second attempt so i would really appreciate your insight !
here's the link to my copy :
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• Sep '24
5/10. Someone already pointed out.
I'd appreciate a like Nd follow
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• Sep '24
thank bro! liked already btw
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• Sep '24
second ever copy please review mine and point out the mistake so i can improve
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• Sep '24
it was good but you have to build intriguing part.
I'd appreciate a like Nd follow if you like the review
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• Sep '24
I just finished with some intriguing part please review and leave comments
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• Sep '24
give me access for suggestions, I've some ideas to make it better.
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• Sep '24
Done
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Hi guys! i would really appreciate if you assessed my second copy:
thanks!
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• Sep '24
Hi, everyone. I wasn't born in an English-speaking country. I'm not making excuses, but Tyon said to do this:
Compile:
  • Common sayings
  • Angles
  • Hooks
  • Offer
  • What most people teach and why it's inferior
  • What I teach and why it's superior
  • Stories
I really don't know how to research this. It's my first time, and maybe that's why this is my roadblock to starting research. If someone can help me fix this, I can move forward. I guarantee I will be better, and next time, I'll try to help you with something. Help me out this time, dude.
Thanks for your time.
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• Sep '24
Hi guys can somebody review my new piece of copy? I would appreciate it
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• Sep '24
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
on point!!!
I'd appreciate your like and follow
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• Sep '24
This is not for any promotion or sales. Just a free mind content.(SL: The Greatest Liar Of All Time)
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• Sep '24
I definitely think that's a banger SL 😹🫡
The second statement,“Every person who is reading this at least have a shallow idea” is a deal breaker even for me. U literally just told me that I'm not the only reading this so I don't feel special anymore. (Even if it's an obvious case don't say it). U are definitely an Andrew Tate fan that's for sure 😂😂
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• Sep '24
Lol I took inspiration from him only😂
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