I got some time on my hands to review some copy. Take a look at one I just wrote this morning and lmk what you think. I'll do the same with yours if you drop the link! LETS GO https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lj1TEeDRIRFC7qknEX6CnHsfc_0qJgKcV1jlfrZUM7o/edit?usp=sharing