@Abbas Aliasghar Good work you've done there! As this is your first copy ever, It was actually good! Your starting was good But be sure to be specific to the reader or they won't show any interest For me it's 6/10

@K Inferno Perfect brother! 9/10

@Sidhant Kr 4/10 Suggestions are useful Also you need to add their long term losses, like less sales/leads

@Abdullah Kaleem 6/10 Make it smoother and shorter Also format it using chatgpt

@Zaid Haroon I agree with @Darsh Jain Give some testimonials, or add a VSL layout

@Mahfuzur Moyeen It is good, but you can add more sense of urgency in it Justify that how poor diet can lead them to more hair loss.

@Rivindu Pesara Damn brother you Nailed it🔥🔥🔥

@Dave Lalropeka 3/10 Your copy lacks flow And also add hooks, catchy phrases to make your copy more intrigue. Keep practicing🔥