Can you rate my email outreach 1-10(and give some advice)

You need to FIX this!!!!

Hey Sal

I’ve been following you for a while now and

I really enjoy your instagram story videos

But...

I noticed something that might be holding you back

from getting even more clients.

Soo…

If you're looking to level up your coaching brand

and attract more clients,

there's one thing you need to fix.

I could send you a free 2-3 min video

where I’ll cover:

🔹 What it is thats holding you back

🔹 How it’s holding you back from getting more clients

🔹 And How to fix it

If that sounds good,

just reply to this email and

I’ll send over the video.

If not, no worries at all!

Thanks for your time,

Matiss

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