Hey all!
Please delete if not allowed, but I just wondered if I could get your thoughts on a fantasy trailer track I'm working on for a library. I got some feedback and have made some changes, but I'd love to hear what you think and whether there is anything else you'd add?
The feedback I had on the original was...
"The start of the track needs to indicate the genre much faster. Something that conveys a fantastical or mythical quality to quickly signal to the listener what type of film/TV show this is. It needs to be more engaging as well. It goes on a bit too long without much variation. At :56 the action and intensity needs to pick up more to drive the track forward. Add more tension here and start to establish a more compelling rhythm with the percussion here. In the third act, expand upon that driving percussion to create more synchronized moments with the melodies and drums. I love the dramatic weight here, but it just needs to sound more action oriented."