@Kayolynn A the first part of the email needa improvement (your hook) and the flow is weak and rushed, I would rate it a 5/10, there are some suggestions inside.

@Jacqueline Sanchez ok, from what I've seen the design looks elegant and sweet but the words sound aggressive with the swearing, it's like an innocent girl with dirty mind😅 (just an analogy), and the text is very small, maybe you can start with these suggestions.

Left some suggestions for you inside, hope it helps!🔗

Here's my copy, rate and review pls. ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1PJQjmSqRSRCx97vXyxX1_ARSPh_LgVRu9b-RfDxGI_k/edit?usp=drivesdk

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PJQjmSqRSRCx97vXyxX1_ARSPh_LgVRu9b-RfDxGI_k/edit?usp=drivesdk I'll really appreciate if you can review mine.💯

I have reviewed your copy, you can add curiosity to your SL, some lines could be cut and shortened, it will create flow and engagement, I have left minor suggestions about your CTA inside if you find it helpful. Can you review my copy, I'll appreciate it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PJQjmSqRSRCx97vXyxX1_ARSPh_LgVRu9b-RfDxGI_k/edit?usp=drivesdk