Hey man i would appreciate if you could review this copy, https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WqmodNJF-HpW0uA-ckw_78mTnbK1i1SM0XHaLJiVIks/edit?usp=sharing Thank You!

@Suresh Venkat you have to press share, then press "give acces to anyone on the internet" and change it to "commentator mode"

@Suresh Venkat DONE

@Yassen Ex the comment?

@Yassen Ex thank you very much! I really appreciate it man. I really liked What you said about making it shorter i Will really work on it😁

@Karabo Semenya yeah I don’t really know either😂

@Zain Hassan ok man willl do! Thank you very much😁

@Aryan Dhang I wrote a few comments but i will summarize her 1. Im sorry my friend but you have to improve your english, there is no way around it and i understand, i dont speak english in my country and its not easy to write in a diferent language. 2. Your copy lacks a structure. In the beginning you talk about consistency but then randomly you switch to diet, use either a template like DIC or NESB (you can google these) or you can plan your copy better before writing. Like who am i writing this to? Why am i writing? what do i want them to do? ETC. 3. just keep working bro and you will get better, im a beginner myself and we just have to keep working. 💯

@Aryan Dhang You can do it man i believe in you!