@Cristian Radoi YO G! Brother you need work a lot on this copy!! something like focusing more on the target audience. check out the comments! you will get.

@Glory Rachel Great!

@Abdul Moeed so your outreach and talk them on email and if possible then try to be on slack or telegram or signal(majority of clients are on it) this are the platforms which acts like instagram for them in their daily life. hope you find something valueable.

@Yassen Ex great copy but as per the reader's pov WIIFM (what's in it for ME) is missing which is crucial element So if that's clear and if you add that then share the modified email copy here

just reviewed check it out

@Sean Anthony your email copy is amazing but as per READER'S POV: A shorter SL is a great option for this and the "proof" line is something that is not needed but instead, a picture will work amazingly. the shift from value segment to sales is quite harsh in the sense value should be the main objective and then you should offer your solution for this.