Instead try this… The PAS (Problem-Agitate-Solution) framework is a classic copywriting technique designed to engage your audience by addressing their pain points and providing a clear solution. Here’s how it works: 1. Problem: Identify and highlight a specific problem your audience is facing. This grabs their attention and shows you understand their struggle. • Example: “Struggling to generate consistent leads for your business?” 2. Agitate: Amplify the emotional impact of the problem by emphasizing its consequences or how it negatively affects their life or business. • Example: “Every day without new leads is another day your competitors pull ahead.” 3. Solution: Present your product, service, or idea as the perfect solution to their problem, offering hope and a clear path forward. • Example: “With our proven lead generation system, you’ll have a steady stream of qualified leads, guaranteed.” It’s effective because it focuses on your prospect & connects with them emotionally, keeps them engaged, and positions your offer as the relief they’ve been searching for.

@Scott Aksamit EXACTLY!! And yes I did ask him if he was doing his own outreach or using a service. Can’t wait to hear his answer and go from there. I politely give people unsolicited advice on their messages all the time! 😂

Welcome to the community @Scott Aksamit !! Congrats on a thriving martial arts studio! Are you specifically going to target martial arts studios? Or any brick and mortar business that targets locals?

@Scott Aksamit LOVE it!!

@Princess Mendoza Aww! 🥰 So happy to have you both on the team! We are so lucky to have you!

@Josua Mendoza Aww!! ☺️ Well, having both of you on my team is definitely a huge win for me too!

Welcome everyone!! So excited to have you all join! Let's learn and grow together! Tel us a little about yourselves? Who do you help and how do you help them?