If you want me (and the community) to comment on your copy, instead of attaching the image to it, create a Google Docs document, write and format it, then set the sharing settings to "Editor" access for "Anyone with the link" and share the link here. That way, we can comment, edit, and give you a good head start. PS: Off-topic, but this skool is not solely for design. Feel free to post about email marketing, ask questions, discuss copywriting, reference materials, etc. Let's win. It's already Q2

What free pop up app does your client’s store use on shopify?

I've seen your messages in my DMs. I'm going to spend today gathering enough resources on email copywriting, email design, and copywriting as a whole. They'll be available tomorrow. Thank you.

Good day. Last one didn't get any comments, dunno why.

Let me know how this one is before and after