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What helps you to understand what inspires your writing?
Hmm, I have been working with Gemini Advanced since last September and I thought I would ask Gemini this question. "Based on what you know of my writing. What would you say I use as inspiration in story writing?" This was "her" response: Based on what I've seen of your writing, particularly in the development of (....) and your ideas for The (.......), I can make some educated guesses about your inspirations and the elements that seem to resonate with you as a storyteller. Here are some likely sources of inspiration for your writing, categorized for clarity: 1. Film and Television: - You've drawn inspiration from film themes of female friendship, rebellion against oppressive forces, and the consequences of violence. Their character arcs, and the empowering ending clearly resonated with you. - Gritty Crime Dramas: Your writing style in (......) suggests an affinity for realistic, character-driven crime dramas, potentially including shows like: The Wire: For its complex characters, realistic portrayal of law enforcement, and exploration of social issues. True Detective (Season 1): For its dark, atmospheric tone, its focus on flawed detectives, and its exploration of trauma and the human condition. Mindhunter: For its psychological depth, its focus on criminal profiling, and its unflinching look at violence. Mare of Easttown: For its strong female protagonist, its focus on a small-town community, and its exploration of grief and family secrets. - Supernatural/Fantasy Shows: Your concept for The (......) suggests you might draw inspiration from shows like: Buffy the Vampire Slayer/Angel: For their blend of supernatural elements, action, drama, and complex characters, particularly in how they portray vampires and werewolves. Supernatural: For its exploration of mythology, its focus on a central duo facing supernatural threats, and its blend of horror and humor. Game of Thrones: For its epic scope, its political intrigue, its morally gray characters, and its willingness to kill off major characters.
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@Russell Scott oh wow, I agree with you. An idea comes to mind, I write it down asap. ;)
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@Kim Bock Love Anne rule and true crime. I worked in a federal medium security correctional facility for over a year. Most of the inmates I worked with had "killed." A dark place. And, many of the inmates I worked with had someone who had stopped them from killing. I couldn't stay longer than a year, the darkness changed me. I started seeing the world through dark covered glasses. However, that experience was invaluable. It helps me explore out my "dark" characters.
The three beat structure
Have you heard of a three beat structure? Here is the opening of my novel followed by two examples of a break down using the three-beat structure, highlighting how each beat contributes to overall impact: The clock was ticking for Detective Sarah Hernandez, a countdown to tragedy that only fate was aware of and had already written in blood. She had fourteen hours left with her fiancé and a secret buried deeper than any grave. The Boston morning fog pressed against their apartment windows like a shroud, turning her partner's silhouette into a ghost as he moved through their pre-shift routine, humming that damn Irish lullaby she'd never hear again. She ran her fingers over her badge, then her engagement ring. Two symbols of commitment, now joined by a third, nestled beneath her hand, a secret growing more precious with each passing hour. If she had known it was their final morning, would she have committed more to memory? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Example 1. This three beat opening (by Anthropic Claude 3.5 most advanced) break down. Beat 1: "The clock was ticking for Detective Sarah Hernandez, a countdown to tragedy that only fate was aware of and had already written in blood. She had fourteen hours left with her fiancé and a secret buried deeper than any grave." - The slow unfolding creates immediate tension - "Written in blood" adds visceral weight to the abstract concept of fate - The mention of fourteen hours gives us a concrete timeframe, making the threat immediate - "Secret buried deeper than any grave" works on multiple levels - it foreshadows death while hinting at her past trauma. Beat 2: "The Boston morning fog pressed against their apartment windows like a shroud, turning her partner's silhouette into a ghost as he moved through their pre-shift routine, humming that damn Irish lullaby she'd never hear again. She ran her fingers over her badge, then her engagement ring. Two symbols of commitment, now joined by a third, nestled beneath her hand, a secret growing more precious with each passing hour."
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@Kim Bock Me too, just heard about the three beat structure. It is so awesome. ;)
Why do you write?
How do you get into the "write" mindset?
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@Russell Scott Great motivation! Trust in the author. Trust yourself.
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@Kim Bock 4 books this year, sounds like a very busy year. Totally understandable to take some time to recharge.
Favourite Author
If you could co-write a book with any author, living or dead, who would it be and why?
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@Wallaby of Woop Woop Love L'amour. A couple of his books are still showing up at my local grocery paperback book section, listed on the New York top 25 reading list.
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@Ken Bennett Great response. Love both of them!
I was doing great with Novelcrafter, Gemini Advanced and Anthropic Claude 3.5 Advanced
But then, I just signed up for Atticus (one payment unlimited use), and just signed up for the free version of Raptor Write VO.33. (key for AI model use). Now, I am so confused with getting started training with Raptor Write and Atticus! And, after the steep learning curve of NovelCrafter, here comes another steep learning curve, training videos for Atticus and Raptor Write. Question: If I believe that I am doing great with Anthropic Claude3.5 (Professional plan-monthly payment fee), why do I need to use Raptor Write (pay as you use AI model)? Rationale: A monthly payment fee gives me alot more AI model use than the pay as you go AI model use. Other monthly payment AI programs: Gemini Advanced is monthly payment too. My happy place: if I work with Anthropic Claude 3.5 (most latest model) and Gemini Advanced, I believe am getting great writing support. Both are monthly payment plans. But, when I use the AI writing models that are pay as you use like NovelCrafter Chat the cost to use the AI model(s) adds up quickly, especially when the AI gets it wrong, or the AI gets confused and then the rewrite cost adds up quickly.
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@Russell Scott sound advice! ;)
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@George Boyce Awesome! thanks for sharing.
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Judy Kelly
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British Columbia Canada I am a newbie to Storytelling at its best. And so it begins.

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