for the next few days, I’m giving brutally honest copy reviews just drop your down below👎 Heres mines https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ztv--MB_IfKE9IjQHJ1HHMFJAebO8-9rfF0nuD8zBQk/edit
@Mark Keian Gubat good keep practicing you on a great track the only thing I can say to approve this copy I had a little bit more flare like underlined and bold more parts of your copy
What’s up, everybody? Review my copy down below, and I’ll review yours in detail! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wPV0k7qCPgvJ5TMtQKo3gd6VqiULHNbiPxBI7S9OqgM/edit
@Shilpa Poddar first I looked at the word count and it’s almost 800 words that’s a whole essay, this has to be condensed at least try to bring it down to at least 400, should be quick easy to read, this is aim for like the average person going through their email they want to read something between two and 300 words
@Victor Alozie I think this is a really great welcome. Email. The only thing I’ll do is just try to condense it down a little besides that it’s wonderful