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20h ago in
Get your copy reviewed 👇
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18d ago in
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New comment 3d ago
0 likes • 3d
@Motasim Tirmizi Good angle, good hook, just needs a better structure and smoother flow
0 likes • 3d
@Tejas Vedere Good angle, CTA is alright, it just needs some improvements on flow. I recommend reading the email out loud to catch any inconsistencies, and then putting it through ChatGPT to fix punctuation and grammar.
9d ago in
Review my copy
This is the copy written by me pls review it and share your thoughts and corrections in it THANKYOU! Rate it out of 1-10 https://docs.google.com/document/d/16NdzXbtz44v4et3gAB2hk3py74-o1ZIh/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=113327223130663245361&rtpof=true&sd=true You can also follow me on IG https://www.instagram.com/noman.leads?igsh=MTg5emJmbjlweHV3eQ==
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New comment 8d ago
0 likes • 9d
You've got the right ideas, you just need to work on execution. Fix the SL, cut the fluff, simplify your message, and revitalize the flow. This has the potential to be a pretty banger email with some adjustments 👀
Oct 17 in
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New comment 28d ago
1 like • 30d
@Vasa Mitrovic Not sure if you wrote this email for a prospect or not, but I highly recommend you look for businesses and prospects to write emails for, so you can practice writing in their brand voice (super important)
0 likes • 28d
@Salman Th Just gave you some insights.
Oct 16 in
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New comment Oct 17
2 likes • Oct 16
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