@Victor Alozie Pretty decent stuff, structure was good, execution needs some adjusting. You also have three different CTAs, which is way too many. Could be improved with minor adjustments, but other than that I'd say the email was decent. Good stuff Super important note: try to link or reference the prospect's socials whenever you submit copy for review so that the editors can factor in the brand voice when reviewing your copy. If the email brand voice doesn't match the company's brand voice, that's a really serious concern.

@Emmanuella Eledu I can't help you with specific suggestions because the document is set to read-only. However, the main critiques I have with the email are the extremely excessive use of emojis and the amount of long sentences. Overall I think it's a really solid email, probably the best one I've seen in this thread so far. 7.5/10. 👍

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Finished a big project and a couple of courses. Not much, but I'm getting somewhere 💪

For me, I wish I'd started building my online profile sooner. I'm currently growing a Twitter account (user: jwhackett) to build community awareness. When I started actively engaging on Twitter, I realized that building on Twitter early on helped me: 1. Write more clearly 2. Get to the point in my copy 3. Find communities full of leads I'm still a beginner copywriter, but I strongly think Twitter is one of the best platforms to begin a copywriting career. I don't know about platforms like Instagram and YouTube because I never build online profiles for them, but I just find that Twitter makes it super easy to build a following and attract sick leads in the process.

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