bruh😅 dont get it😀

to be honest i dont realy know about this niche so the review is hard for me but, add this: smoother transitions a better WIIFM improve youre writing style its pretty bad. use a template and chat gpt. create space between a sentence keep practicing, great things take time. als watch some Tyson 4D vids they real help

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o4rHHT02Kfs8Q_n0pX0L9-O89nWVAg9jHin4FDYs1tE/edit?usp=sharing

@Akif Hasan thanks will work on it!

Got a new one😀 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o4rHHT02Kfs8Q_n0pX0L9-O89nWVAg9jHin4FDYs1tE/edit?usp=sharing

@Otsana Steven all i saw was already said. but i still wanna say this: the idea is good. but, it could be written in like half the words. also it looks like a combined version of a PAS and a HSO template. that makes it verry messy to read. tip: use chat gpt and some templates if you have new emails just send them i will review. keep practicing💪

@Zuwa Osa thanks!