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Tyson uploads a copy
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bruh😅 dont get it😀
Please, review my copy and drop yours in comments to be reviewed.
An email for a perfume brand https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wv17S_oRPWBLw-QvFolBf2djrsNa9hY0X0p5mX2cWC0/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment 3m ago
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to be honest i dont realy know about this niche so the review is hard for me but, add this: smoother transitions a better WIIFM improve youre writing style its pretty bad. use a template and chat gpt. create space between a sentence keep practicing, great things take time. als watch some Tyson 4D vids they real help
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o4rHHT02Kfs8Q_n0pX0L9-O89nWVAg9jHin4FDYs1tE/edit?usp=sharing
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o4rHHT02Kfs8Q_n0pX0L9-O89nWVAg9jHin4FDYs1tE/edit?usp=sharing
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DROP YOUR COPY FOR REVIEW.
Try to drop your best version of your copy.
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DROP YOUR COPY FOR REVIEW.
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@Akif Hasan thanks will work on it!
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Got a new one😀 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o4rHHT02Kfs8Q_n0pX0L9-O89nWVAg9jHin4FDYs1tE/edit?usp=sharing
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my latest copy: https://docs.google.com/document/d/18T1yM5uyoQs9-ZJK1hQwfj-aySUF004FoOmQDqkIb-4/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment 23h ago
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@Otsana Steven all i saw was already said. but i still wanna say this: the idea is good. but, it could be written in like half the words. also it looks like a combined version of a PAS and a HSO template. that makes it verry messy to read. tip: use chat gpt and some templates if you have new emails just send them i will review. keep practicing💪
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@Zuwa Osa thanks!
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