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Aug 12 inΒ
Build our portfolio
Follow me on Instagram and I'll follow back. https://www.instagram.com/gavinthewriterguy/ Don't forget to like this! π₯π₯³
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New comment Aug 29
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@Sharan Singh Followed!
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@Harshit G Followed!
1 like β’ Aug 25
Review and rate it please: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k5D8K0Opu-iWxHUTYjk6ASbv2XLDAFpNqsNH3NEWe_8/edit?usp=sharing
1 like β’ Aug 23
Please review and rate it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PunI90gfW7LMBleUmWoFvO0PkqQk5rqOww84Fg0WiC0/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes β’ Aug 23
@Eitan Shalomov Thanks
Aug 12 inΒ
Reviewing Copy and Sales Pages
If anyone can take a look at my sales page that would be great: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tJcSiVZFbKd4iFFWumrKtA3VrPas-zaqoVpzEIjNkUw/edit?usp=sharing I'm thinking of using it to build a portfolio. Also, drop your copy or sales page, and I'll try to review them. Don't forget to leave a like! π₯π₯
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@Enia Jordan 1. The hook can be more specific and less vague. ("Precious" could've been specified) 2. It needs a clear and strong WIIFM 3. Paint a better dream/fear state (Make it feel more impactful) 4. CTA can be stronger ("Perfect routine" doesn't it stronger, specify)
0 likes β’ Aug 22
@Enia Jordan Sorry for the late reply, 1. Needs more logical appeal. (Lots of emotional appeal that gets their emotional side sold, but not enough for the logical side) Use testimonials, statistics, and borrowed authority. 2. It needs a strong and clear WIIFM
Aug 19 inΒ
follow for a follow π€
If you want your prospects to trust you, you need at least 200 followers. That's why I'll follow everyone who follows me at @matejcrhak and comments below his Instagram username β¬οΈ
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New comment Sep 14
0 likes β’ Aug 19
Done! Mine is @gavinthewriterguy
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