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Build our portfolio
Follow me on Instagram and I'll follow back. https://www.instagram.com/gavinthewriterguy/ Don't forget to like this! π₯π₯³
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@Sharan Singh Followed!
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Review and rate it please: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k5D8K0Opu-iWxHUTYjk6ASbv2XLDAFpNqsNH3NEWe_8/edit?usp=sharing
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Please review and rate it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PunI90gfW7LMBleUmWoFvO0PkqQk5rqOww84Fg0WiC0/edit?usp=sharing
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@Eitan Shalomov Thanks
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Reviewing Copy and Sales Pages
If anyone can take a look at my sales page that would be great: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tJcSiVZFbKd4iFFWumrKtA3VrPas-zaqoVpzEIjNkUw/edit?usp=sharing I'm thinking of using it to build a portfolio. Also, drop your copy or sales page, and I'll try to review them. Don't forget to leave a like! π₯π₯
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@Enia Jordan 1. The hook can be more specific and less vague. ("Precious" could've been specified) 2. It needs a clear and strong WIIFM 3. Paint a better dream/fear state (Make it feel more impactful) 4. CTA can be stronger ("Perfect routine" doesn't it stronger, specify)
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@Enia Jordan Sorry for the late reply, 1. Needs more logical appeal. (Lots of emotional appeal that gets their emotional side sold, but not enough for the logical side) Use testimonials, statistics, and borrowed authority. 2. It needs a strong and clear WIIFM
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follow for a follow π€
If you want your prospects to trust you, you need at least 200 followers. That's why I'll follow everyone who follows me at @matejcrhak and comments below his Instagram username β¬οΈ
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Done! Mine is @gavinthewriterguy
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