Can you criticise my new long form video?
I am some what new to editing and have recently gotten back into it due to me taking a gap year and finding the time to edit again. This is my first editing a long form video where I am talking about my past experiences. And in this video is talking about I relied on luck to carry me through my success in life but ended up ruining me. I like doing this niche so far as it has allowed me to have creative freedom and I am actually want to wake and do these videos. So could someone give me the positives, negatives and potential improvements? as I would like to improve on my editing skills and refine them in the best why possible so I can grow big on social media like youtube or instagram and help others. Also, can you commented if you saw this on your home page, would you click on it? if not, why not? At what point did you feel like you wanted to click off? Was I able to retain your attention? What about the music, what should I put in the video or should I replace it? Thank you for watching it and any advice would be grateful. (note: I couldn't attach it on here so I put on unlisted on youtube but I am not trying to gain clout as I re upload a new version starting at 0 views on my channel)