Yo guys...hope yall doing great now lets say i outreached to someone and i sent them a free value and they liked it and the said something along the lines of "this is really great, i like it" what to do next like how to get them today or how can i take it to the next step were we start talking about the business

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l2hVCp3In8z7hslqHZsGKyYns4BhB6kWWXBX98dwj40/edit?usp=sharing

Here is an ecom abandoned cart email copy I wrote recently. Can you review and rate this one? Here is the copy: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ieepRHfGPjOeT0qjiKseA0zIcYS5ACvPN_eL2Tw21h8/edit?usp=sharing I hope it's not that bad😅

one more thing guys I outreach from my account that has nothing to do with copywriting...I just take pics (not npc pic ofc) and I post it. If someone saw my account they wouldn't even know that I am a copywriter except for the "entrepreneur" thing we put in our bio...is it gonna work or should I put content and that?... @abdoelwan_dp . this is my ig if you want to take a look at it and tell me your thoughts I would be happy (and maybe follow ;) )