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Hey guys, havent been active in a while but havent been sleeping (at least partly), and wanted to run a track sketch through you guys. I find this sample on splice which sounds basic af and kinda generic / clyche but I feel like it does its job. What do you think and do you have some ideas to make the vocal more unique maybe? The other question would be, do I have enough material for an arrangement? All other feedback welcome as well of course, thanks!
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• Nov '23
Hello Magnus
I like your "sketch" - really powerful and so wonderfully "minimal". Definitely a good basis for a track. Enough material - well, some element that gives your track a "recognition value" - is still missing in my opinion. But in this respect I'm probably far too overloaded & perhaps not the "best counsellor". :-) By the way, have you heard my latest track yet: https://www.skool.com/the-weltsound-mentorship-5925/track-feedback-happy-innocent ?
Anyway: I like your style and am always happy about your tracks.
Greetings from Zurich,
Beat
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• Dec '23
Hello Magnus
Wow - great track. 😍 Especially from 3:40 onwards I think your track is simply great! Compliments for sound design - tension build-up. Also the "stutter voice" @ 4:00 is amazing and once again creates an incredible amount of energy and tension. Respect for your producer skills. WoW!
Fingers crossed that your track can be placed on a cool label - I think there's really a lot of potential here. Yes! 💯
Greetings from Zurich,
Beat
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Hey Magnus, cool sketch already! I think the simple synth + vocal works very well - also the 2nd drop with the 303 synths a lot to the track, good job here. Your Kick & Bass sound great individually but there's some masking going on. Using 3x 16th notes in the bass mostly collides with the Kick in the low end so make sure you SC only the Low End of your bass to the kick :) Also I think you can add some more variation to your hats (& maybe some percussion?) to keep the groove interesting!
All the best!
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