Honest thoughts and points to improve. Was sent something similar a few days ago so thought I’d improvise and use it.
“Hi Paul,
It’s great to connect with you!
I’m reaching out to see if you know any coaches who might be struggling with their email marketing—whether it’s low engagement rates or difficulty finding the right words to connect with their audience.
I’m offering a limited number of 1-week trials where I’ll create a tailored email sequence to boost engagement and conversions.
In exchange, all I’m asking for is a brief testimonial.
Does anyone you know come to mind?“