Jul '24 (edited) in 💬 General
Hey guys drop some of your best copies, I will review and rewrite it. 😁
It will take some time to rewrite, so be patient 😊
Also drop some likes!!
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• Jul '24
Hello everyone
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• Jul '24
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• Jul '24
Review: Already it's a great copy (I just played with it)
1. Starting can be little smooth
2. Added little bit of humor
3. Great use of emojis
4. Separated urgency (Reduce the chaos)
5. Slightly changes in format
Here's your re-written one -
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• Jul '24
sorry but I have $1.99 to my name
Do you gave a scheme to turn $1.99 into $10,000
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• Jul '24
Bro did you land any client, the copy is amazing I reviewed it!
Only your S.L is little vague, and format is bit misaligned. Overall, 8.5/10
Here is revised version:
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• Jul '24 (edited)
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• Oct '24
give your honest criticize in this email, with pure intention of reviewing it.
Hope experience writer can see this have a good day!!!..
please rate in scale of 1-10
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• Oct '24
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• Jul '24
I can teach you how to turn your $150 into $5,300 in just 2hours without sending money to anyone or interrupting your daily activities for more infor…. Click the link below 👇
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• Jul '24 (edited)
1. S.L is too long (Make it attractive and in between 0-40 characters)
2. Add more personalization
3. Don’t use jargon words
4. Service promotion is abrupt
5. Too long copy
6. You don’t have to add everything about service in Email
7. CTA is weak
8. It fully made by an A.I (Not convincing)
9. Use P.S properly
10. Write important points in bullets
11. Write your Email between 250-280 words
Nice try Man,
Here's your re-written copy:
It's not perfect but better.
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• Jul '24
You have limited time.
Limited attention.
Limited energy.
Limited effort.
Life is transient.
Today will soon end.
Tomorrow is unknown.
What will it all be for?
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• Jul '24
My 2nd ever copy
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• Jul '24
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• Jul '24
Untitled document (2).docx
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• Jul '24
Could someone review this email for fitness niche. For a new workout program https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ODh_kpJkGfRM6PMndzh3Y4JAk-pZ7JV2jtYr3rsUW38/edit?usp=sharing. Also rate it out of 10 and don't feel shy to send your copy, I can give a review as well😉
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• Jul '24
I've just written a second sales email to Air purifier. Could you help me check it, thanks a lot my fr
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• Aug '24 (edited)
#30th Email Completed 🔥🔥
Review and rate please😎
Like my comment please
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• Aug '24
It's not ready I need you comments...
Online biz niche.
Lastly rate it out of 10🧐
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• Sep '24
Review and rate my Landing page🥰
I invested three days in making it.
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• Sep '24
Review and rate my Deadline Email🥰🥰🥰
It’s my 54th Email😎😎
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• Sep '24
24 hours left deadline Email
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Hi guys! i would really appreciate if you assessed my second copy:
thanks!
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• Sep '24
This is not for any promotion or sales. Just a free mind content.(SL: The Greatest Liar Of All Time)
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• Sep '24
btw its my first time in y copywriting journey write an welcome email sequence without using ai rate it 0/10 and review it https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IbYcSSavmXe7HmoFpGJQn1KNdmHSUDDwi8HRqvR0eqs/edit?usp=sharing
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• Oct '24
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• Oct '24
57th Welcome Email🦖
Review and rate it also🧐
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• Oct '24
please add comments
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• Oct '24
do you mean on my copy?
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• Oct '24
can you review this email, and give your honest intention to critique it.
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• Oct '24
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Don’t wait
Just review and rate
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Hey guys drop some of your best copies, I will review and rewrite it. 😁
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