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SORRY FOR DELAY TILL 24 HRS EVERONE COPYS WILL BE CHECKED EVEN IF IT WILL BE 100 BECUASE ITS FKIN 6 AM NOOW AND I FORGOT TO SLEEP ☠️
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Hello, DM let chat
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IM CHECKING ALL NOW WAIT
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checking all wait
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Hey guys! I have a training email following the PAS structure for a dating coach
Need some feedback please
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GOOD BRO 10/8 LEFT COMMENTS LEAVE LIKE
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CHEKED EVERY PIECE OF COPY HAHA 2 HRS SPENT BY
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• 14d
thank you for effort brother. I appreciate your input on my copy
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NO WORRIES ALWAYS HERE FOR HELPING PPL
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wait guys im checking all dont spawm so much and leave like also
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FIX IT FROM OLD REVIEW FIRST AND LIKE THE POST AND THIS REPLY SO I COULD SEE YOU AGAIN
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NE GIVE A LIKE TO REPLY SAND [POST FOR REVIEW
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i am fucking comming for all bomb me with your all copys im gonna let you improve so much today goal is 100 reviews drop like bombs
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GIVE ME MORE COPYS BRO ARE YOU DONE IM STILL CHECKING NO COPY IS THERE LEFT WHICH I HAVENT CHECKED BRO COMMON DONT BE THAT FKIN SLOW I SAID BOMB ME WITH COPYS YOU DIDNT EVEN USE TAN YOU STILL ON GUNS DROP MOREE IM HUNGRY TO CHECK💪
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10/4 LEFT COMMENTS
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MAN GIVE IT A LIKE BROOOO
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dgrZudPv-9VGoiTda3QFpnFNBAj3TE0V05PaA4rpU8E/edit?usp=sharing Here's my edited email copy with noted advise from these group. I appreciate it a lot.
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LEFT COMMENTS LEAVE A LIKE
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LEFT SOME COMMENT DONT FORGET TO LIKE BROOO SOLID 10/6
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left comments leave a like mann lets go
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• 14d (edited)
2nd ever piece
Let’s get it💪🏾💪🏾
Review mine and I’ll review some others
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MAN LEFT COMMENTS TAKE THEM SERIOUSLY IT WILL TURN YOUR EMAIL TO 8 OR 9 YOUR NOW AT 4 . HAVE A GOOD DAY DONT FORGET TO LEAVE A ;LIKE TO POST AND REPLY
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appreciate the critique
I like the honesty and harshness
Definitely gonna make me better
Hope u have a good rest of the month with copy. Keep grinding. And getting 1% everyday
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• 13d
Hey Avinash, I read your email and it needs some improvements, and I left you some comments that might help you improve man 😉
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LWFT REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE MAN FOR MY TIME TO THIS REPLY AND POST
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• 13d
hey Parth, I read your email and it's good, but I left some comments that might help you improve it, hope they help you
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I would appreciate an honest feedback on my work. Thank you in advance.
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YOU ALREADY GOT ONE FIX IT FIRST LEAVE A LIKE BTW
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10/8 MAN I LOVE READING YOUR EMAILS YOUR GOING TO PLACES KEEP IT UP
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BRO HAVE SOME FLOW DONT MAKE IT SHORT IT JUST HAVE 13 14 LINES TYOU CAN DO BETTER BEST OF LUCK
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LEAVE A LIKE BTW
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THE ANGLE CAN BE BETTER AND CTA TOO WELL COPY IN THE MID
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Niche: Health & Fitness
This is the 1st email for a welcome sequence. Kindly review and rate out of 10.
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ALRIGHT IT WAS A GOOD MAIL CAN YOU DO ME A FAVOUR LIKE SOME OTHER REPLYS OF ME IN THIS POST
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I HAVE REVIEWED 60 EMAIL TODAY I WOULD NOT MIND IF ANYONE DOES MINE PS : IM AT TOP 1 LEADERBOARD IN JUST 2 DAYS https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eSPjKSpKPvMoAL8VmggpYIFZsobrp7oYNq3kPpazCck/edit?usp=sharing
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bro you rmail have tons fo review then come to me to fix it and like this post and reply to get review often and fast
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good email left comments to make it best ! leave a like ont this and other reply of me under the post so i can be best for your review . have a good day
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i liked yours, you can like mine if you want. thanks
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GOOD COPY STILL CAN BE IMPROVED THERE WAS SO MUCH INTRUIGUE WHICH MISSED OUT URGENCY AND ANGLE AND WIIFM
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LEFT AN OG REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE
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• 9d
Thanks man, maybe you can like my comments too so I can level up?🫡
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LEFT ONE LEAVE A LIKE
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Keep up the good work guys
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I LEFT NO MERCY LOL
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What’s good y’all I wrote an email with two different
styles of copy let me know what y’all think
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left a review
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DONE LEFT SOME COMMENT DONT FORGET TO LEAVE A LIKE 3/10
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yo chill on the likes brother. these likes won't make you money, copywriting will
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GAVE ME EDIT ACCES MAN AND ALSO LEAVE A LIKE TO GET REVIEW
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• 14d
open again
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10/4 LEFT COMMENTS AND DONT FORGEET TO LEAVE A LIKE
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10/3 I DONT KNOW BUT ITS SALESY
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• 14d
Your valuable review will help me a lot.
Value Email in Fitness Nich
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BRO NAH LOOK LIKE YOUR IN A RUSH TOO SHORT 10/3 BTW LEAVE A LIKE FOR REVIEW
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Please check it out.
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MAN YOU GOT SKILLS FLOW WAS GOOD BODY WAS GOOD YET BODY STARTING AND HOOK THAT WAS SOMETHING THAT WAS NOT GOOD YET YOU MANAGED BUT FIND OTHER HOOK OVER ALL 10/8 GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP ! AND LEAVE LIKE BOTH TO REPLY AND POST
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10/4 . TRY HARD MAN RESPECT FOR TRYING
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10/5 CAN BE BETTER YOU GOT SKILLS BUT AI WONT HELP PRACTISE MORE AND LEAVE A LIKE MAN
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• 14d
thank you brother. I'll put in the work
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OVERALL 10/6 LEFT COMMENT LIKE IT MAN
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Thank you for the review man
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left comments dont forget to like
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man left some comments dont forget to like to this reply AND POST TOO BRO
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• 13d
dropped a quick review
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GOOD LEFT SOME COMMENT LIKE THIS REPLY AND POST IN EXCHANGE OF MY TIME
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Hello am new here
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you're welcome
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LEFT COMMENTS LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY AND POST IN ECHANGE
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Please review my copy and provide honest, constructive feedback. Rate it from 1 to 10.
👇
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LEFT COMMENTS LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY AND POST IN EXCHANGE
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done left commnets dont forget to like
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Dropped a review.
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YOU ALREADY GOT SO MANY OF IT FIX ALL FIRST LEAVE A LIKE FOR MY TIME
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Niche: Health & Fitness This is my 3rd email for the welcome sequence. Kindly review it and rate it out of 10. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ikbPJDkJE3GX1wLVITkWzJyPYPczGyhZVbhphvVeVoI/edit?tab=t.0
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LEFT COMMENTS YOU COULD DO BETTER KEEP GOING LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY AND POST FOR MY WORK
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Education niche.
Check this out. My first draft .Be as harsh as possible. I really want to improve this
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WELL ITS DOENT LIKE AN EMAIL YOU CAN DO BETTER MAKE A EMAIL WITH REAL CONTENT WISH YOU LUCK LEAVE ALIKE FOR MY TIME
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LEFT REVIEW LEAVE LIKE
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MAN TOO SHORT BUT GOOD ANGLE 10/7 LEAVE A LIKE FIR REVIEW AND POST'
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YOU ALREADY GOT ONE FIX IT FIRST MAN THEN COME LIKE IT BTW
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LEFT COMMNTS LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY AND POST
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LEFT A REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE
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YOU HAVE GOT SOME ALREADY YOU CAN DO BETTER BEST OF LUCK MAN LEAVE A LIKE FOR MY TIME . AND REVIEW
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Hii everyone
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Well I will post my Copy soon
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LEFT REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY AND TO POST
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• 12d
Yo bro can you help me fix this shit, I want to send this to my prospect
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YOU ALREADY GOT SO MUCH REVIEWS ! BTW I READ IT AND ALSO A LIKE FOR MY TIME
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• 12d
MY ECOM COPY https://docs.google.com/document/d/18l5Bjtg6rXoLx_nv3TLXrsCdaTw8a0cC-yHMTfwUZmg/edit?tab=t.0 also could you guys follow my insta @osim.uwa so when i start outreaching I dont look like a bot, ive got 2 post copyriting related so you know im not just asking just for followers oh yeah its a new account aswell forgot to add
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Please like this I’m trying to post lol
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left comments dont forget to like this post
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left big comments to improve like the reply it motivates me
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• 11d
the aim is to grow my gee (vice versa). and thank you brother
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left comments dont forget to like
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you miss alot of stuff go fix it like this post and reply
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• 11d
Thank you for the review
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bro you got potential improve more . lleave a like to reply and post and other reply also it helps me too check more
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left comments bro improve you got potential everyone has put into the work leave a like for my time
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• 10d
Thanks for the tips
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leve some comments dont rely on gtp so much alright email that have so much pottential i wrote so much to improve best of luck and leave a like to post and reply
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• 11d
I only used it once
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gimme acces and like this reply
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• 11d
oky try now
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left some comments dont forget to like man/ girl
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idk you were a boy or women thats why i wrote it lol dont
take it wrong
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left comments check mine email they are bigger and are to point you can take inspiration to write in flow https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eSPjKSpKPvMoAL8VmggpYIFZsobrp7oYNq3kPpazCck/edit?usp=sharing
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left a review
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LEFT A REVIEW
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LEFT YOU REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE
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• 10d
hey man thanks for your replay yesterday check this one out and let me know what do u think i appreciate every comment im just starting and it really helps https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tjpr6RV5PEETCgtqOvV54mIp2Pybbeq5J9IFS9LZ_Tk/edit?tab=t.0
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LEFT YOU REVIEW AND NO WORRIES I AM SUPPORTING YOU KEEP GOING
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AS YOU WISH LEAVE A LIKE AND CHECKOUT THEN
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Thanks man, I have some questions on some comments, it would help a lot if you could answer them
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already reviewed it lol !
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g left some comments and you got just silly mistakes in the pep talk but overall it was good 10/6
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• 10d
The community is awesome, but I wish I could contribute :( Could you like my comment to help me level up?
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LEFT A REVIEW FOR IMPROVING ND LEAVE A LIKE FOR REPLY
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thanks man i appreciate u check this one out lett me know what do u tkink https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tjpr6RV5PEETCgtqOvV54mIp2Pybbeq5J9IFS9LZ_Tk/edit?tab=t.0
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left an og review bro
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left an review
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• 10d
Dropped a review. Hope you’ll like it
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thank you very much
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you already got big ass reviews
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I would greatly appreciate some feedback and advice!
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left some comments idk what you writting much
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sound salesy more
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improve do not be that
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bro why you using gtp that much . use it less use to get info angle or idea
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Bro thanks for the tip. I appreciate it
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YOU ALREADY GOT SO MANY REVIEWS
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LEFT A REVIEW AND LEAVE A LIKE FOR THE TIME I SPEND ON REVIEWING
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• 9d
Hey, can you help me review this copy and tell me how to improve this shit
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YOU GOT TON OF REVIEW LIKE THIS BTE I WILL NOTIFY WHEN YOU DROP MAIL NEXT TIME
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I GOT A REVIEW FOR YOU LEAVE A LIKE ARNAB DONT BE THAT RUDE AND GIVE ME MORE COPY JUST ONE? BR0 IM FKING ANIMAL I CHECK 100S DAILY
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LEFT A GOATED REVIEW DONT FORGET TO LEAVE A LIKE AND DROOP MORE COPIES I AM FKING FREE BOYYYYSS
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• 9d
Thanks man🫡
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LEFT YOU A GOATED REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE HOMIE ! 💪
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may you get me ACCESS TO REVIEW AS EDITOR OR SUGGESTIONS
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gave you a fantabulous review like this reply and post . and you can submit copy here anytime i will check it in less than 8 hrs weith a fkin badass review telling your mistakes
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LEFT YOU A REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE TO REPLY FOR ME REVIEWING GET YOU BRO
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LEFT AN OG REVIEW LEAVE A LIKE
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FORSURE MAN
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LEFT A REVIEW AND LEAVE A LIKE
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left the review
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LEFT A REVIEW
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thanks man, you're helping me a lot
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hello Im a beginner and this is my first copy
I have two versions the first one being the copy I wrote myself and the second one being promt by AI. If you can review this I would appreciate it.
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you already got ton of reviews clean the copy first fic it then i will check
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left review bro
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thanks bro I check it out
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• 8d
ive been copywriting almost 1 year and i quit and start my personal brand and again im back so rate it 0/10 and review it https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YR2XrpF5zxikjHc5Jh3oYGlOdHBtiAyT66ILEFblf04/edit?usp=sharing
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remove shit tons of reviews first i cant comment
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idk how much time from your doing ccopywriting even improve bro
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left a review 10/4
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bro email has potential to turn sales on left some comment good copy but 10/6
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• 8d
Let me know what I did right
Let me know areas I can improve on
Suggestions for WIIFM and Better SL would be appreciated 🙃
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got potential but so many mistakes left a review leave a lke
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LEFT A BANGER REVIEW BRO
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YOU DONT MADE CHANGES I ALREADY HAD REVIEW MAKE THE CHANGES DONT SEND SAME AGAIN
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hey man i appreciate you so much thanks for every comment i appreciate it so much i made this so check it out and let me know what do you think https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zfHlXFZYg9GfqvNYhUVqWmSv9AUgtQB5IPJy-Ih93UY/edit?usp=sharing
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LEFT A REVIEW
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• 8d
again brother, let me know what I should change and rate it 1/10🫡
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OG MAIL BRO 10/7
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GO WORK BRO YOU GOT THIS
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YOU ALREADY GOT SHIT TON OF REVIEWS
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• 7d
I sent this a day ago
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BRO YOU PULLING OUT SO GOOD EMAILS SO FOR OG YOU GOT THIS
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• 7d
Thanks man🫡
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YOU ALREADY HAVE
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LEFT A REVIEW
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left some og reviews
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bro are you wiritng this much emails wth
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• 7d
yeahhh, why?
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left a review
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Thanks for the feedback
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bLsjBShKww4YtlddWuClR3OO3LcPBgb_jihVArNu-0w/edit?tab=t.0 man check it out and let me know what do you think appreciate you
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already critiqued by many guess i dont have to
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you already have a review
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so many comments already
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hey check it out and let me know what do you think appreciate you guys https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JeQEN5M3z5UvwzJFIqSdEnVOY8vZbvPvQGdhQq33w7Y/edit?tab=t.0
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make it spacing too tight i cant read and critique
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• 20h
okay check now
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so many comments
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left a review bro
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what do you mean by email goal?
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email is critiqued already
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• 2d
Here is a Criticized and Rectified Story Email.
Thanks to the strike throughs to fill the previous email.
To make this current version.
But it still needs more strike throughs
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most is fluff bro be consisce and straight to point take notes left review and comments
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check this one out and let me know what do you think appreciate you guys
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bro already 38 comments clean it then i will critique
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already 21 comments
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check this out let me know what do you think appreciate you guys https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NH_rJfV7WbZv6zRE1V8QCMglqJkOpefcscWFLZMG8rw/edit?tab=t.0
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access sir
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• 21h
thanks i forgot there you go
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you tried but it makes no sense to me because give proof or have backup with strong science or borrowed authority and very short email not every email has the goal to sell . you must focus on giving value to audience more don't become every email have to sell something prove something your just yapping in the email you should have learn basics bro
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please review my product description any tips would helpful thanks!
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dont mind send me direct link
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already have review and your email is too short.....
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Every day I write at least one copy, today's copy is this one, you can analyze it and rate it from 0 to 10
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man why complicating things just write normal easy to understand i just read start i do not understand what you mean in the middle and the end
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can be way more better
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man genuinely your flow is good and easy to understand but you have potential this could be great email listen and make changes make it entertaining add wiifm and change the butterfly analogies if not make it sound easier and add urgency and scarcity if its a hard sell if not then let it be as it is now ! also ass some gif make it intriguing add preview line ......
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• 18m
man check it out and let me know what do you think appreciate you https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YbPW9Nq5i3QjNpHAczm94_POZse31nSoXmHjNNYQFA4/edit?usp=sharing
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