๐Ÿณ ๐—ฝ๐—ผ๐˜„๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐—ณ๐˜‚๐—น ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐—ฝ๐˜† ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ฝ๐˜€ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐˜๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐˜€๐—ณ๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—บ ๐˜†๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—ฟ ๐—ฐ๐—ผ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ต๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ฏ๐˜‚๐˜€๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€ ๐—ถ๐—ป ๐Ÿฏ๐Ÿฌ ๐—ฑ๐—ฎ๐˜†๐˜€
Letโ€™s face itโ€”being a great coach is only half the battle. If your copy isnโ€™t pulling its weight, your dream clients may never know how you can ๐˜ต๐˜ณ๐˜ถ๐˜ญ๐˜บ help themโ€ฆ
The good news? A few small tweaks can make a huge difference.
And no, you donโ€™t need to be Dan Lok to pull these off:
๐Ÿญ. ๐—ฆ๐—ฝ๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ธ ๐—ง๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ถ๐—ฟ ๐—Ÿ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐—ด๐˜‚๐—ฎ๐—ด๐—ฒ ๐Ÿ’ฌ
Use the exact words and phrases your ideal clients use to describe their problems.
Targeted writing sets you apart as an expert in your field.
๐Ÿฎ. ๐—ฆ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—น ๐—ง๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ป๐˜€๐—ณ๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜€, ๐—ก๐—ผ๐˜ ๐—ฃ๐—ฟ๐—ผ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€ ๐Ÿ“ˆ
Donโ€™t get stuck in the weeds of your methods.
People donโ€™t care about the technical detailsโ€”they care about who theyโ€™ll become by the end of working with you.
๐Ÿฏ. ๐—ฆ๐˜๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐˜ ๐—ช๐—ถ๐˜๐—ต ๐—ฎ๐—ป ๐—”๐˜๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ป๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป-๐—š๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ฏ๐—ฏ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—›๐—ผ๐—ผ๐—ธ ๐Ÿช
Your opening line should hit your audience right in the feels.
Think:
โ†ณ Bold or controversial statements
โ†ณ Questions that spark interest
โ†ณ Quick, irresistible wins
๐Ÿฐ. ๐—ง๐—ฒ๐—น๐—น ๐—ฅ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ฎ๐—ฏ๐—น๐—ฒ ๐—ฆ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ฒ๐˜€ ๐Ÿ“–
Share personal or client stories to connect with your audience on a deeper level.
This builds trust faster than any list of credentials.
๐Ÿฑ. ๐— ๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ โ€œ๐—ฌ๐—ผ๐˜‚โ€ ๐—ง๐—ต๐—ฎ๐—ป โ€œ๐—œโ€ ๐Ÿซต๐Ÿฝ
Your audience wants to know whatโ€™s in it for ๐˜ต๐˜ฉ๐˜ฆ๐˜ฎ.
Flip your copy to focus on their:
โ†ณ Needs
โ†ณ Desires
โ†ณ Challenges
(Bonus point: Try polls or question prompts to figure out their pain points)
๐Ÿฒ. ๐—–๐—น๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฟ, ๐—”๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป๐—ฎ๐—ฏ๐—น๐—ฒ ๐—–๐—ง๐—”๐˜€ โ–ถ๏ธ
Donโ€™t leave them guessing what to do.
โ†ณ Want them to book a discovery call?
โ†ณ Subscribe to a newsletter?
โ†ณ Download a freebie?
Tell them exactly what action to take and how it will benefit them.
๐Ÿณ. ๐—”๐—ฑ๐—ฑ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€ ๐—ง๐—ต๐—ฒ๐—ถ๐—ฟ ๐—ข๐—ฏ๐—ท๐—ฒ๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜€ ๐—›๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฑ-๐—ข๐—ป ๐Ÿซท๐Ÿฝ
Anticipate common concerns and address them proactively.
Show them how your offer solves their concerns. Give them the confidence they need to move forward.
Your copy doesnโ€™t need to be perfect.
It just needs to: ๐—–๐—ผ๐—ป๐—ป๐—ฒ๐—ฐ๐˜ โžž ๐—ฅ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐—ผ๐—ป๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ฒ โžž ๐—œ๐—ป๐˜€๐—ฝ๐—ถ๐—ฟ๐—ฒ ๐—”๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ผ๐—ป.
โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”โ€”
P.S. Whatโ€™s one copywriting tweak you think you could make today to connect with more clients? ๐Ÿ‘ฅ
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Hasan Kamran
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