Give feedback on my about page?

And possibly sell me into your own group..? (Looking for a good Skool growth community to join)

https://www.skool.com/live-your-legacy-5981/about

I’m about to go full out on getting members in and I would love feedback from the inside on how the About page is hitting.

Here’s what I’m creating:

I think that all parents should be wealthy, and all parents should work towards making a good percentage of their income passive so that they can get time back to spend doing what they love, with the people they love while being the healthiest, best version of themselves.

The group:

A community for parents that brings only the best/most impactful education, opportunities and resources together so that parents don’t have to weed through so much BS to get mountain moving results.

We will not only feature online side hustles, but also unique biz opportunities, investing strategies, real estate, credit repair etc… plus monthly lifestyle workshops on relationships, wellness and family travel

I personally have spent upwards of $70k on courses and coaching programs and learned a lot.. including the variance in the quality of programs.

I also don’t believe one size fits all so a big piece of value will be helping parents find what works best for their unique situation.

Eventually the community members will have first access to Hotel Cataleya family travel retreats—launching in the future:

https://thehotelcataleya.wixsite.com/mysite

Over time we will also be putting together a real-time resource bank which will include a collaboration matchmaking service within the community.

Who I’m trying to attract:

Parents who want to be their best selves while their children are young.

Parents who are seeking to build more passive and semi-passive income streams without it consuming all of their time, so that money and work schedules are no longer ruling their decisions in family life.

Parents who want to travel more, spend more time together, empower their children and live differently than the status quo.

The plan:

Start with a high value feee group
Partner with experts to monetize with one time purchases in free group
Eventually offer a paid group that is an accumulation of the highest value resources that have come through the free group - based on feedback and engagement

I would love feedback on whether or not my description page is conveying the message of what I described here.

I’m looking to join maybe one or two high value groups here in Skool that can help me fast track the success of my group… if you think yours is it, let me know why in the comments.

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