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Oct '24 in
Email review ✉️
Post your email link here for review, pls not I give honest and brutal reviews and I also give corrections and Ideas
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0 likes • Oct '24
@Nick Price this is my review on your copy If I'm being completely honest with u I couldn't read the copy till the end Here is why your SL is intriguing but the pacing is completely off and when your pacing is off and cramped up your audience might have the patience to read it even if u have a good product or service So work on that A 2/10 copy Keep up the good work 💪 Pls like and give a follow I'd really appreciate it 🙏
1 like • Oct '24
@Praise Benjamin here is my review on ur copy 1 SL is intriguing but make it shorter cause I won't want it to be cut when in ur audience mail 2 I don't which structure u used but the opening is really cool 3 a what wiifm clearly stated 4 good pacing 5 good justification 6 a well delivered CTA You could work on your grammar and shorten some sentences but an amazing copy overall A 7/10 copy Keep up the good work champ 💪 Pls like and give a follow I'd really appreciate it 🙏
Oct '24 in
Email review 2
Here is my first copy, review this and I'll review yours Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VQfk_mb8rreP4ejx3EEa02QpGMTFAt19Yp9cEcvL8mQ/edit?usp=sharing
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Oct '24 in
My First Email copy
Hey guys I’m new here and this is my very first email copy please check it out and drop your honest feedback, thanks. https://docs.google.com/document/d/12MLZPZbXBqoaE_GkONxC4pE4i3F963c5CBUvC_MEYho/edit
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2 likes • Oct '24
1 SL is intriguing 2 u showed u understand their problem 3 u gave a wiifm 4 u keep it intriguing till the end And the pacing was good This is one good email Keep up the good work 👍
Oct '24 in
Writing my great first email has ruined me
I had written my first email only yesterday, and it has made practice impossible. Let's go back a few hours. I had only written my first email and wanted to see how I did, I couldn't evaluate how good my own copy was since I was new, so I posted it here, And people said it was great, for a beginner's first copy. Sure, it was imperfect, but I was proud of it. Fast forward to now, and I can't write my second email, I feel paralyzed, like I can't think of any good subjects lines to start with, or even start typing anything. I didn't want to make anything worse than my first email, I had unconsciously put my first email as a standard I need to uphold, and I had developed a crippling sense of perfectionism. I'm starting to feel stupid or something, because I can't seem to write at the level I wrote my first email at, and I'm constantly erasing my second email. I never even reached 5 sentences before I erased it again. Un-shockingly, haven't written shit today.
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1 like • Oct '24
I'm also a beginner not even up to 2 weeks in the game so what I would do is get my preferred niche and look for businesses under that niche on Instagram and look at how I can either write an email to get people come to their business or read their email and see how I can improve it and the u send it here to get reviewed
Oct '24 in
Review my welcome sequence please
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12e0wSw-OkVCrHr8n5CDZZRnitgvrkRlAnDzKI6IC4sg/edit?usp=sharing
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1 like • Oct '24
Pretty neat 👍
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