Post your email link here for review, pls not I give honest and brutal reviews and I also give corrections and Ideas

Here is my first copy, review this and I'll review yours Link:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VQfk_mb8rreP4ejx3EEa02QpGMTFAt19Yp9cEcvL8mQ/edit?usp=sharing

Hey guys I’m new here and this is my very first email copy please check it out and drop your honest feedback, thanks. https://docs.google.com/document/d/12MLZPZbXBqoaE_GkONxC4pE4i3F963c5CBUvC_MEYho/edit

I had written my first email only yesterday, and it has made practice impossible. Let's go back a few hours. I had only written my first email and wanted to see how I did, I couldn't evaluate how good my own copy was since I was new, so I posted it here, And people said it was great, for a beginner's first copy. Sure, it was imperfect, but I was proud of it. Fast forward to now, and I can't write my second email, I feel paralyzed, like I can't think of any good subjects lines to start with, or even start typing anything. I didn't want to make anything worse than my first email, I had unconsciously put my first email as a standard I need to uphold, and I had developed a crippling sense of perfectionism. I'm starting to feel stupid or something, because I can't seem to write at the level I wrote my first email at, and I'm constantly erasing my second email. I never even reached 5 sentences before I erased it again. Un-shockingly, haven't written shit today.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12e0wSw-OkVCrHr8n5CDZZRnitgvrkRlAnDzKI6IC4sg/edit?usp=sharing