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SEND YOUR COPY TO ME AND I'LL REVIEW IT
Just finished my tasks for today and I got a lot of time today until tomorrow. Now if you're wondering if I'm even qualified to review copy... Well, I worked for 2 businesses before and handled both of their emails and blogs, And I went through a couple of free and paid courses for copywriting. So, if you think that's enough for me to give you an alternative perspective on your copy, Then reply it to this thread asap!
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New comment Jun 24
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@Korkai Parithi K Done! You're getting there, just a few more tweaks.
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@Saad Nawaz 1ST COPY: - I'm going to the gym, but what does "hitting" mean in the subj line? - I would describe their problem much more in the first few lines just so they can see that we have a lot of knowledge regarding it. - I would keep the same example (Ronnie Coleman) and expound on it further rather than changing it to a water balloon. This is so the reader won't get confused. - You presented protein powders too fast. Add some lines that gradually introduces it. - The words "worry not, there's still a solution" is salesy. - 95% is better than the entire word "percent". - Introduce the product much better. There are a lot of other protein powders out there that are also budget friendly so how does your product differ? 2ND COPY: - Subject line kinda looks like AI generated. Make it more intriguing and answer the question "what would make the reader open this email immediately?" - I would change imagining yourself into something that would show them being envious or jealous. (This is because we want to really trigger the reader's emotional side.) - "People with good physiques get more attention than the average person." - Choices shouldn't be just "as a friend". Since you're email is going in the route of attractiveness it's probably better to change it into something like "women choosing between two people". - Introducing an expert coach immediately sounds extremely salesy. I would add some analogies like "How do you think top NBA players keep improving their game? They simply have coaches and it is the same when improving your body." - Again "worry not" sounds salesy. - Make your pre-CTA and CTA copy much conversational. Treat it like you're just talking to a buddy. Instead of just saying "start your free trial". It's better to introduce it in a friendly way like "I'll even give you something cool, a free trial to my coaching!" - Lastly, it's nice to put some logic into it like "You get to experience my coaching, risk-free."
Having a wild dilemma that you might also experience...
I badly need your guys' opinions about this dilemma. So, my main expertise is email copywriting. Sure, I would like to also learn copy for sales funnels, landing pages, etc. (Skill stacking) But I also figured that I haven't had enough experience with email copywriting, Or even enough results to be considered someone "valuable" in that certain skill. So the dilemma is: - Do I continue honing my email copywriting skills/resume, - Or do I keep continuing to stack skills to be more flexible with my work?
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How I made $11,289 in April 🔥💀
_ First of all. I don't make that yet : ) But here it's just an example of a great hook that keep you reading this post. Keep that in mind! 😊 P.s = drop ur own hook at the comment box.
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Love the hook! 😂
skool games😍
creating my own community and joining the skool games was worth it.
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is it worth it?
IS SKOOL GAMES WORTH IT?
Anyone here created a community here in Skool? Is it worth it even though I don't have that much followers in my social media accounts? Let me know!
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