Pls review the first half of my sales page(literally just headline and 100 words copy) and I'll review your email. https://www.canva.com/design/DAGL_ddWJBw/Ib5YCmluz0KUtPKToD-MQw/edit?utm_content=DAGL_ddWJBw&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton I will review 5 emails max. (one per person)