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Aug 30 in
COPY REVIEW!
DROP YOUR COPY LINK , I will rate it out of 10 AND GIVE SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR ENHANCEMENT!
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New comment 23d ago
1 like • Oct 1
@Alpha Qilin 7/10 , its great alpha qilin!
1 like • 23d
@Chris Wells the SL is salesy, feels like a spam i would not open this email - the body was good tho. 7/10
Oct 8 in
Can someone pls review my landing page?
https://www.canva.com/design/DAGSt72TIDE/iX2C9EJPkhex45NXJbVcfg/edit?utm_content=DAGSt72TIDE&utm_campaign=designshare&utm_medium=link2&utm_source=sharebutton
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New comment 30d ago
1 like • Oct 10
the headline needs improvement and enforce strong cta not one time but scatter them in the whole page. it kinda felt salesy too so maybe try being friendly and more engaging.
Sep 3 in
guide me !
how are THESE ONES? 1. SL:FINALLY! Maximize Your gains Faster! PV: 2. SL:CONSISTENCY Is Not Enough?! PV: Here’s what YOU Need 3. SL: At Last Holistic Muscle Gains! PV: 4. SL: Effortless Holistic Muscle Gains PV: 5. SL:Are you Results-Driven ? PV: Here’s What You Need 6. SL:Consistency Is Broscience !PV: Here’s What You Need Instead 7. SL: Starting A New cycle?PV: You Need To Understand This 8. SL: The Only Way To A Perfect Physique PV: 9. SL:The Shortcut to Your Dream Body 10. Speed Up Your Journey to Peak Fitness 11. Your Express Route to Shredded Gains 12. The Quick Path to Serious Muscle 13. Get Ripped Faster with This Plan 14. Turbocharge Your Way to a Sculpted Body 15. Rapid Results for Your Ultimate Physique 16. The Fast Track to Massive Gains 17. Accelerate Your Muscle Growth Now 18. Unlock a Killer Body in Record Time
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New comment Sep 5
0 likes • Sep 5
@Ryan H, yeah ? i am confused in this - review the copy and then tell me what suit it the most and will be more convertible https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ewrI6JFNAx2kaP8VyCBEn2RKGe43hSe1CIRhy9HhCwA/edit
0 likes • Sep 5
@Kazim Mahdi okay
Sep 4 in
review my copy , i'll review yours
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZkABPxuQ6PBX3RFBN4p8i886FvSPsW1H0xWCYgtNtZc/edit
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New comment Sep 4
0 likes • Sep 4
@Thavija Nandasiri hmm, i guess it works
0 likes • Sep 4
@Thavija Nandasiri maybe yes , i should edit the SL , and will take a look at the broken flow,thanks- apprecaiate your review!
1 like • Aug 28
@Joseph Rafael yes you surely u did a good work , please dont mind me much- cuz i am a beginner too and not the customer. just focus on getting the conversions , testing is what we should focus more on. its all good unless or until you get good results from the target audience.
1 like • Aug 28
@Joseph Rafael i will be honest - ponder over the reviews from someone one or two level higher than you only
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@shifa-parvez-6083
Learning digital pursuation. share your copy, I will review it and you may review mine as well to get better , thanks!
Active 19d ago
Joined Aug 23, 2024
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