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Jul 29 in
Newsletters?
For a handful of my clients, I am thinking of adding a free newsletter into the deal. As a newsletter takes about 15-20 minutes to write and is super useful to have. What do people think? Btw I am gearing this towards martial art gyms. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J3ueuMD6-dNFuAwJAOlDv-Bh9qb0aQeC9fyWvD2wng4/edit?usp=sharing Also can you rate it /10.
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Jul 26 in
Please review my copy
I'm struggling to get clients so if anyone could help with that I would appreciate it. Anyways here's some copy I made, please review and give it a rating, thanks. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OtbbRqk-EZc2JQi925FpJFUd-DNVfkLtEQR8wG7Fh2w/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment Jul 27
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@Vishal Kumar Right, really good content however. Some of those chunky paragraphs are a real turn off. Try not to write a paragraphs that covers more than one line, sometimes it can be broken but not often. Also try and draw it out a little bit, you need to make sure they are getting good value before the CTA.
Jul 22 in
Please review my copy
I am planning on sending this to a lead so I need it to be perfect. Please pick out a few mistakes and give me a rating out of 10, don't worry about being nice. THANKS https://docs.google.com/document/d/11FLdHNHHzPYGHelt_VdZEMUOeOsySWw4QYNKlE36F48/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment Jul 23
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@Bander Khalid Thanks
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@Máté Tőke Cheers I agree sometimes I go a bit far, thanks.
Jul 14 in
Please review my copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eyk1SUJg_eojp1lWEFyI1QIcp7xvGk4DuoK-jkcQ0HQ/edit?usp=sharing I think it is too long, but I don't know exactly what to take what to remove. Thanks so much if you can review it for me.
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Jul 6 in
Please review my copy
I would really appreciate if you could do any of the following: 1. Rate my copy out of 10 with reasoning. 2. Comment on doc for any specific changes. 3. Leave a comment to say what I did well and what I did't 4. Say what I need to bring my copy to the next level. https://docs.google.com/document/d/16MbmlqDWBH9rhkAxXlA8guOJ0ntlpfbFaj5kIdGSMI4/edit?usp=sharing
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@rory-clarke-8529
Young, has been on self-improvement for a year. I am mainly interested in copywriting, gym MMA and football. I am going up in the world!
Active 15d ago
Joined Jun 17, 2024
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