@Cristian Radoi It's just an example on creating an engaging Headline .If you want more insights on headline , you'll tell me 💥

Keep the copies coming ,I will review them all at once

@Ahmed Maarij 1.The subject line is fine but make sure to add some emotions and do not make it too generic ,try something like "Your Last Opportunity? Make It Count!".. Be creative 2.The structure is fine but try to add fear points by saying how not having sales as a business person could make things hard for you and how not knowing how to sell your skill can disadvantage you ..that would create the desire to avoid that by clicking your program 3.And also paint how it would help them ,Also have social proof for your product by showing testimonials or pictures ...Also add real scarcity or urgency to drive the readers to act fast

@Sara Parvaiz 1.The subject is fine but a little bit boring and generic ,try to be creative and by the help of AI..try something like "From ‘No Way’ to ‘Perfect Fit’ – My Dress Story"..Make sure to keep it under 40 words 2.The structure of the email is fine ,But you can also paint a picture in their minds of how your program would really help them ,or how would they look like after buying your program .. Also challenge the reader’s ego 3.create real urgency or scarcity, That would drive the readers to act fast ..And build social proof for the product, By adding some pictures or testimonials to gain the readers's trust

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YkkKjkXMtNa60-Q8o7ZQnIdVQ4Z1dfmYl0MP4ABVN0w/edit?usp=sharing

@Aamir Patwa Thanks for the review Brother ,really appreciate

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YkkKjkXMtNa60-Q8o7ZQnIdVQ4Z1dfmYl0MP4ABVN0w/edit?usp=sharing

@Jon Jon https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YkkKjkXMtNa60-Q8o7ZQnIdVQ4Z1dfmYl0MP4ABVN0w/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YkkKjkXMtNa60-Q8o7ZQnIdVQ4Z1dfmYl0MP4ABVN0w/edit?usp=sharing

@Aamir Patwa Thanks for the advice brother