Zombie copy https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pQVXWd7Mc0OwbPlCUjJ6Ui9ooYB-ZEOk9fgbnCPnaqs/edit?usp=sharing

@Ussama Yousaf Pg 4: Make the "you havent learned..." bigger than the "one ismple reason" and move the give me access button down because you havent revealed what the secret is so the reader doesnt actually knoe if the button is worth clicking. pg6: "client of me" > "client of mine" remove "as you know" because some people might not know. and you don't have to say you have clients because you obviously have some if you have an ok business. i'm not sure what it was meant by nothing happened in court. maybe you could explain what was supposed to happen too. pg7: curious about what? i think this page is a bit hard to read. i think it's better to say what people were unaware of. it was the said concept, then say "it" instead of "them". And earning what profit? specify. helping people how? pg 8-9 is really good! i think you should move pages 18-19 to the top because thte whole time i was kinda confused on what overage was so it would help if you did introduce what it was. i think it's pretty good i can see you put in a lot of effort lol you're on the right track just need to polish it a bit good job bro

@Ussama Yousaf alright got it. thanks for reviewing really appreciate it.

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