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[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
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[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
0 likes • Sep 8
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TxT6rYJON3b_ZhUk-gQs3fk5M6QPo6PTrhawlCr5AuE/edit?usp=sharing
Wanna get your copy reviewed? Drop it below 🔥
I've got some extra time to review, just send it. No asking for like or anything else.
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Wanna get your copy reviewed? Drop it below 🔥
0 likes • Sep 5
@Andreas Ostergaard ummm, its a 3.5/10, The reasons are in the document comments, but other than that. Focus on the structure, The democgraphics, The CTA, And making the so consumable and easy to understand.
0 likes • Sep 5
Its a good email ngl, the only comment is try your best to be specific. instead of telling, show instead. Don't say, tired, Paint a vivid imagery of how tired that person might be, like maybe coming from the gym, after hitting all types of bicep exercises, only to end up not growing 2-3 inches. (it came right out of my head)
MIC DROP! GET YOUR BEST COPY REVIEWED
DROP YOUR BEST COPY. I WILL REVIEW ALL OF THEM AND GIVE BRUTAL INSIGHTS ON EVERYONE'S COPY. ALL RATINGS /10..ALL I NEED FROM YOU IS TO LIKE MY COMMENT. LET'S GOO! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P6M4sjaC78MXOeUlsCgc_rFb39Uh0b34jIf5A3jPnbA/edit?usp=sharing
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1 like • Aug 29
this is my first sales page. i'll appreciate every feedback i get. "https://docs.google.com/document/d/197HWallzQKRp05riKzDiJglAiaCNL9LbpMGru_Eel60/edit?usp=sharing
Send in yo copy for reviews!!!
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0 likes • Aug 29
this is my first sales page. i'll appreciate every feedback i get. "https://docs.google.com/document/d/197HWallzQKRp05riKzDiJglAiaCNL9LbpMGru_Eel60/edit?usp=sharing
Accelerate your copy by getting it reviewed
I will provide you meaningful and useful Feedback on your copy. Please drop your copy, like and comment so you can get your reviewed.
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0 likes • Aug 29
this is my first sales page. i'll appreciate every feedback i get. "https://docs.google.com/document/d/197HWallzQKRp05riKzDiJglAiaCNL9LbpMGru_Eel60/edit?usp=sharing
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