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Feedback on my "go-to"?
Hi there! I have worked on a first version of a pitch to explain what I am the "go-to" person for, and would love to have your feedback. So here it is: "I bring back human interactions at the heart of e-commerce for ethical French brands and local shops, for an authentic and fun experience." What do you think? What do you understand with this statement? And what do you understand of what I do?
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I like the way you combined in the first sentence human interactions and e commerce. It is not clear though for me what you do exactly; maybe Comms and Marketing! The sentence β€œfor ethical French brands and local shops, for an authentic and fun experience." is a bit too long, technical and not clear.
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Malakeh El Haj
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