Can you rate my video edit from 1 to 10

I'm new here :) Croatia (20) , Adobe Premier Pro

My name is Santiago, I’m from Argentina, and I've been editing for 1 year. I’m currently making about $0 per month from video editing and I want to be making $5k. I started editing by… watching self improvement videos and wanting to make money and learn the ability. I want to improve my editing career in these areas: 1. Prospecting clients and getting to work 2. Working focused and more productively 3. Learning new skills and methods to edit fluently For fun, I like to: 1. Work out and do kick boxing lessons. 2. Listen to music. 3. Read about self improvement books and authors