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35 contributions to The 4D Copywriting Community
1 like • Aug 21
@Treston Cardenas You're SL isn't strong enough. You're copy isn't long enough for you to present the product or to make the target realize how bad there situation is. This is PAS not DIC. You're transition to CTA reveals that you just want to sell and not to help. You're missing a lot with a short copy. Left some reviews, Wish you the best of luck
1 like • Aug 22
@Tan H SL doesn't build enough curiosity to get you're email opened. You're story doesn't have enough intrigue. Make it a bit more intriguing. Try making long lines shorter to make them more effective. Re-read to check which lines you can improve and which ones you can remove. Don't mention features, only the benefits. You have to come from a perspective of helping and not selling. Make you're CTA stronger. Use P.S and fear. Fear is like saying you don't want to be the guy whose been working out for 2 months but looks the same or Don't waste 6 months not improving/just to quit. Use it before CTA. Left some reviews, Wish you the best of luck 4/10
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New 1 like= review
I'll go deep into everything and if you have any questions I'll answer for you
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0 likes • Aug 16
@Yassen Ex You're SL is good but you're story doesn't even come close to it. If someone clicks on that SL they'll be thinking how can I improve my diet. I don't understand what the email is talking about the whole time so there's no value you're giving out. Re-read before sending cause you need readers to understand. Left some reviews, Wish you the best of luck 3/10
0 likes • Aug 16
@The Beast I like this email. What did you remind you're friend. some awkward lines. Close to the CTA add I see many businesses take years to get their first milestone. This system will guide you away from the mistakes. 8/10
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TBH Who Else Feels Like Quitting!!!!!
Not Shakespear but I'll cook to my best ability. Sent like F*cking 50 outreach, 10 replies, 0 clients and still outreaching after 2 weeks. This made me slow down but I'm back on this shiii. I just wanna say one day you're gonna land that client. I've seen so many accounts last joined 70 days. Keep thinking what if the next client is the one. Don't slow down, keep the same speed, best of luck. Think of $200,000 in Monaco :)
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1 like • Jul 26
@Korbinian H. Thanks G, I'm 15 to.
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A little reminder for the people in this community.
I'm not here often, but I'm noticing a lot of people asking to "Drop Copies For Review" Just to bring it to people's awareness, reviewing copy and getting top ranks on a leaderboard won't make you a better copywriter or help you get more clients, reviewing beginner copy does not make you better, It's a vice to seem productive whilst actually avoiding the hard work: outreach That's why I'm not here anymore as often, people are using this platform to rank "Top" by exchanging copy reviews (Btw It's not 'copies" It's copy for likes, It's just them avoiding the hard work. Reviewing 50 "Copies" won't make you better, go do some outreach and break down proper copy. Just a note, don't mean to piss anyone off, but keep that in mind, this group only benefits you if you use it properly and not as a vice to procrastinate. P.S. I got to 2kpm by only getting 2 pieces of copy reviewed, It's utterly pointless to ask another noob to review your copy, It's like a beginner artist asking another beginner artist how they can improve their painting. P.P.S. Dropping an outreach script that got me 5 sales calls a month when I get the time. P.P.P.S. Thank you for 180 followers
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1 like • Jul 24
Life saver. I literally spent the last 2 days doing reviews to level up.
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Review my email
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SkAK514lARMQG8YaW7DnT0z5ftuslqO7Z-vdL2yN5Og/edit?usp=drivesdk and rate it+say to me my weak points and how to improve it
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0 likes • Jul 22
@Reyan Gupta That is not good. Practice early so that you don't have to implement later.
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