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Sep 9 in
Honest copy review for you!
Yo homies! drop your banger copies in here!!🔥 don't forget to drop a like!!
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New comment Sep 13
0 likes • Sep 10
@Kyree McGill hey man I want to help you but I don't really know where the landing page start... pretty messy in the begining
0 likes • Sep 10
@Mikey Y like plz
Sep 8 in
PLS REVIEW
Can someone pls review https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aqh0_fxeGn9rbRopgPXQfGJPXFAb16vuFmgfTcls7D8/edit?usp=drivesdk
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New comment Sep 13
1 like • Sep 9
hey man give me a like and I will review it
0 likes • Sep 10
ok, couple of things. 1. pretty good copy, look for small grammar mistakes you made there sometimes. 2. in a product like this that relates to an intimate place like your face I would go deeper on the safe emotion. something like "researches have shown that...." "if it doesn't work get full refund no question ask" try to minemize their skeptical voice. 3. hope it helps, 6\10 keep up the work man.
Sep 9 in
Review my copy and I will review yours.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tPznTWl2aUb_NhUh1-fchYSCscI_Hi2BnQkF1Yd3trQ/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment Sep 9
0 likes • Sep 9
it is going to be a description on my IG page. talking about the meaning of time and taking actions.
Sep 9 in
looking for a partner
looking for someone who is interested to review each other's copies, talk on discord, share wins and just improve together 🔥
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New comment Sep 9
Sep 8 in
1 like = 1 review
you can also review my work https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gnAsSvpAYPqwIl4dJRVsjyNMaWAQcnRau9EUOa7pc_0/edit?usp=sharing
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New comment Sep 10
0 likes • Sep 9
like for reveiw
0 likes • Sep 9
@Reza Darzi hey man, I wrote the review on your doc, go and see it. I will appreciate it if you drop a like for the review
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